Essay topics:
People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 815, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple's attitudes are more determined by the moment than by what society belie...
^^
Line 7, column 862, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e moment than by what society believes.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 14.8657303371 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 98.0 58.6224719101 167% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3394.0 2235.4752809 152% => OK
No of words: 675.0 442.535393258 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02814814815 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09713273454 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80342725776 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 215.323595506 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454814814815 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1085.4 704.065955056 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1539307776 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.555555556 118.986275619 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5 23.4991977007 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25200715793 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877750251818 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564422244134 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135351009154 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380375642754 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 100.480337079 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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