People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Every person thinks differently as no human being shares the same brain. Some people strive to do good while others cause disruption in a society. However, as said by many celebrities based on the support they receive from their audience; good people are more in existence than the bad ones. This simple fact leads to a strong way to find the attitude of a person. It should be determined by their immediate situations or surroundings than by society as a whole.
People are different and to learn them quickly is a big mission. Their attitudes cannot be stereotyped from the image of a society. There are all kinds of brains out there. For instance, men are considered to have bad food preparing skills, however some of the famous chefs are men such as Mr. Gordon Ramsay amongst many others. Additionally, Mr. Ramsay being from England does not imply that all men in Britain cook delicious food. The most important point is that in Britain, many men exist who really make mouth-watering delicacies, at the same time many of them, while they are good at other stuff like racing, sports, etc, they are not good at cooking. We see here that society as a whole cannot represent each person’s attitude. Rather it is the people’s immediate surrounding that define them.
Indians are famous for their information technology skills on programming, computing and related fields and attitude-wise, they are considered serious people. However, there are tons of these brown people exceptionally good at other professions such as sports, entertainments comedians, etc who have no idea about programming and are very jolly and outgoing. Thus, only their immediate surroundings define their attitudes.
Celebrities face hostile environment during interviews. The manner in which they respond to the critical questions represents their ego. Many respond the questions diplomatically whereas few are short-tempered and blow up the interview. Such interviews of immediate situations give a clear picture to their attitudes and behaviour.
The reasons stated above clearly explain why attitudes of people cannot be determined from the society as a whole. Rather, immediate situations or surroundings is the most effective way to know a person’s attitude.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31388888889 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98281989168 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563888888889 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2895352578 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9545454545 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210472316305 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675096829807 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747993757974 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13351460735 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052932842766 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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