People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the posit

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People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Human’s attitude is the first one to demonstrate their impression as people say first impression is the best impression it all depends on the attitude. The prompt states that People’s attitudes are assessed by their reaction to a particular situation or to their surroundings rather than society as a whole. In my opinion, I agree with the statement and argue that people should maintain a good attitude to give people a good impression.

To begin, people don’t notice a good behavior but they notice the behavior. People take longer time to accept something good but they within seconds take something bad. For instance, in a cricket match a guy who helps his team to win 10 matches but didn’t contribute to one match then people will remember only for the match their team lost. Because it is the human tendency to remember the bad things rather than the good things. The above example states that people should maintain the good behavior in front of the people so that they can have the good behavior.

Further, people might sometimes make actions in such a way that it is their instant reflex. They won’t think in that particular scenario because there is not time for thinking. However, few times people behaves in a disparage way but they are not intended to. But people who noticed that behavior take it in a negative way because humans don’t want someone opposing them or someone who is rude to them. For instance, a human who is so commanding is contradicting your views then you instantly start hating him or her because you don’t want someone to oppose your views. The above mentioned example states that people tend to dislike someone for their views even though he is right.

People should carefully consider the people’s attitude before getting into a conclusion. Every human should understand why a person behaved in a way which is not acceptable. If there is understanding between them then there will never be disputes between them. So hence people should not quickly judge people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ber only for the match their team lost. Because it is the human tendency to remember th...
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Line 9, column 220, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...g. However, few times people behaves in a disparage way but they are not intended to. But p...
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Line 9, column 311, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...eople who noticed that behavior take it in a negative way because humans don't want someone ...
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Line 9, column 368, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The word 'someone' in subjunctive clause must be used with a base form of a verb: 'oppose'.
Suggestion: oppose
... because humans don't want someone opposing them or someone who is rude to them. Fo...
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Line 13, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...haved in a way which is not acceptable. If there is understanding between them the...
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Line 13, column 189, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...a way which is not acceptable. If there is understanding between them then there will never be d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00584795322 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65966815302 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3102203073 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189874884054 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062225080729 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558827672506 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119702664334 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595566914918 0.0667264976115 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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