The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

The speaker, here, claims that the best to prepare the younger generations for leadership in any of the fields is by instilling them a sense of cooperation, not competition. Being angled on a single idea to comprehend, such a noble term, leadership is absurd. Leadership includes many things, like composure, being responsible, benevolence, etc. So, partially the statement stated by the speaker is agreeable, i.e. eradicating the sense of competition, this not only holds true to attain leadership but also to any amenable activities. The vision of any person should be so broad that the competition fades with the nobility in the thought. Also, instilling the sense of something into someone doesn't suit in the case of benevolence, which is most probably involuntary or inheritance.
Only by a sense of cooperation, any person will only know how to blend and work with people but in many cases of achieving many higher things, a leader must know to motivate, provide a vision, foresee the consequences, prevent the taunts, etc. For example, a lady of 46 years age, part of a well-educated and couth family and with a decent-self sufficient government job. One night suddenly, she thought of herself and what she is doing, grew up the guilt, and started a startup company, named Nykaa, after 4 years has passed the company touched pinnacles. All was not only possible because she is cooperative, but also had a clear vision, dauntless, and most importantly an idea of showing women in their best, which indeed signifies magnanimity.
On the other hand, if any initiative was taken from an im-prudish leader, the destruction will also be unimaginable. On the top of my head, though there were many taxi service-based companies in India only Ola, Rapido or Uber stand as ubiquitous, because of their vision which is developed from the idea that taxi is a common thing that should be available to any pedestrian in any city. Remaining lack this kind of nature and artful thinking of leadership.
In sum, I partially concede with the speaker that any leader should possess a sense of cooperation but that is not at all suffice and wagely the speaker can not quote it as the best way. And most importantly I am in accordance with the intent of the speaker which is to advance any particular organization by making every citizen a leader. Any developed country or organization need not contain many inventors or innovative minds but certainly should possess responsible citizens. Have a dream consistently earn knowledge that helps to develop a vision to make the future of any entity brighter. The speaker, here, claims that the best to prepare the younger generations for leadership in any of the fields is by instilling them a sense of cooperation, not competition. Being angled on a single idea to comprehend, such a noble term, leadership is absurd. Leadership includes many things, like composure, being responsible, benevolence, etc. So, partially the statement stated by the speaker is agreeable, i.e. eradicating the sense of competition, this not only holds true to attain leadership but also to any amenable activities. The vision of any person should be so broad that the competition fades with the nobility in the thought. Also, instilling the sense of something into someone doesn't suit in the case of benevolence, which is most probably involuntary or inheritance.
Only by a sense of cooperation, any person will only know how to blend and work with people but in many cases of achieving many higher things, a leader must know to motivate, provide a vision, foresee the consequences, prevent the taunts, etc. For example, a lady of 46 years age, part of a well-educated and couth family and with a decent-self sufficient government job. One night suddenly, she thought of herself and what she is doing, grew up the guilt, and started a startup company, named Nykaa, after 4 years has passed the company touched pinnacles. All was not only possible because she is cooperative, but also had a clear vision, dauntless, and most importantly an idea of showing women in their best, which indeed signifies magnanimity.
On the other hand, if any initiative was taken from an im-prudish leader, the destruction will also be unimaginable. On the top of my head, though there were many taxi service-based companies in India only Ola, Rapido or Uber stand as ubiquitous, because of their vision which is developed from the idea that taxi is a common thing that should be available to any pedestrian in any city. Remaining lack this kind of nature and artful thinking of leadership.
In sum, I partially concede with the speaker that any leader should possess a sense of cooperation but that is not at all suffice and wagely the speaker can not quote it as the best way. And most importantly I am in accordance with the intent of the speaker which is to advance any particular organization by making every citizen a leader. Any developed country or organization need not contain many inventors or innovative minds but certainly should possess responsible citizens. Have a dream consistently earn knowledge that helps to develop a vision to make the future of any entity brighter.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, for example, kind of, in many cases, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 14.8657303371 242% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 114.0 58.6224719101 194% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4320.0 2235.4752809 193% => OK
No of words: 866.0 442.535393258 196% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98845265589 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.42474680876 4.55969084622 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94001639965 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.274826789838 0.4932671777 56% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1384.2 704.065955056 197% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8999457537 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.058823529 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4705882353 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 10.2758426966 253% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15487721462 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05143088655 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076275033807 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871535250116 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064408985473 0.0667264976115 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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