The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The statement suggests that for establishing the society, we should prepare its young students for the leadership in government and in the industries. This can be done by instilling a sense of cooperation in the young students, not competition. I partially agree with the statement given here. I would like to discuss my viewpoints next.
First of all, the young students are an integral part of our modern society. The progress of any society depends on a strong background knowledge which is given to the students in their curriculum. I strongly believe that by instilling a sense of cooperation in the youth will enhance their ability of working in a group. For instance, consider a group of students, they are given with the project work. If only one student among them is active and takes responsibility of completing the project, it will take more time than usual. Here, the cooperative view will definitely help them achieve their goal in a less time span.
Secondly, competition is the most differenting factor in any field of work. It determines the success graph of a person. Therefore, to achieve success and enhancing our knowedge in a particular field competition is utmost important. Competition can be reffered as "two sided sword" which has both favorable and unfavorable effects on a person. It depends on a person hoe he/she takes it. By means of competition youth get to know about various fields and theadvancement happening in it due to different technologies. In other way, it only gives the young students the courage and motivation towards the betterment of the society.
Thirdly, consider an example of a leader, leader is someone who gives instruction to the congress and communicates with the people of a nation. His job is to solve the problems of the people, to tackel these difficulties he/she must have good relations with the society. This can only be achieved by the cooperation factor only.
To sum up, I would like to say that for the betterment of a society we must teach our young students the importance of team work as well as the need of competition in the field of their career. With the balance between both the abilities, youth can make their nation reach at the highest point of success.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for instance, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94722955145 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91324899773 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522427440633 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5842429193 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2272727273 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2272727273 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205742583885 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512680106639 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651921350479 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110867586739 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786402035333 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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