Leaders are those individuals who have a vision and ability to take others forward with them. Best known leaders of world are Mahatma Gandhi, Nelson Mandela, Bill Gates, Elon Musk and so on. The undying spirit of these people and their vision of making it big in the world has helped them achieve soaring heights in their life. Most common characterisitics of leaders are: Passion, inteliigence, foresightedness, perseverance, courage and so on. Hence, the complexity of this issue cannot be overlooked. Stating that the best way for a society to prepare its youth for leadership is by indtilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition will be an oversimplification of such a complex issue. Hence, all the associated facets of this issue needs to be warily analyzed before reaching to a conclusion.
A successful leader is a person who has a vision and who takes others along with him to achieve that vision.For example Bill gates- it was vision of making it big in tech world that today we see such big things in world. He was able to achieve this not just by competing with other upcoming giants but also by having the ability to take run a company. He could not have done this without taking everyone together with him which is only possible when a person has a sense of cooperation. Hence, this shows that a leader needs to be both competitive and cooperative at the same time to make big accomplishments
Similarly our Indian Prime Minister Narender Modi, one of the most successful leaders in history of India could not have reached this positon if he would not have been competitive. He had to compete with such big people to get to the position he is today. However, after becoming Prime Minister in order to achieve his vision of making India a prosperous nation he needs to take everyone together be it his cabinet of ministers or people of his country.
Although its true that if a leader is not cooperative he will not be able to sustain for a long time. For example Prime Minister Gaddafi he was known to be an excellent leader but as he was not cooperative towards the people of his country he could not retain that position for long as his own countrymen revolted against him. Hence, to have both sense of cooperation and competitiveness is neccessary for a leader to be successful
Thus, we can conclude that the best way for a society to prepare its youth for leadership is by instilling in them both sense of cooperation and competitiveness. As the competitive nature of the perosn helps him reach the position he wants to reach and the sense of cooperationhelps him sustain that position by taking everyone along with him in order to achieve his vision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, similarly, so, still, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74413646055 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8757358935 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43710021322 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.0 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9095807523 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.882352941 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5882352941 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147348248816 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562993222691 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783985776122 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983030736527 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563798178438 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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