The Youth of any Nation is like one of the four wheels of a car, even if one is missing, the Nation can't advance. And it is very important for a Nation to feel responsible to instill the qualities of a leader in its youth. The Young generation of today has a lucid thought process, the required zeal and enthusiasm and the will to do better than the best. I strongly believe if right guidance is given to them at the right time, the young people will leave no stone unturned to make this World a better place to dwell.
Leadership is one virtue that is seen in all spheres of life. An able leader is the one who has the vision to succeed not only as an individual but together as a team. We can analyze the quality of leadership at two different levels, the first macro, and second micro. Leadership demands both cooperation as well as competition. A perfect blend of cooperation consummate with healthy competition can give rise to incredible leaders.
If we talk about leaders at the macro level, who drives our Nation? Who is responsible to look after the global issues? Who is supposed to take responsibility of the entire human race, address their grievances and heed to their sufferings? The answer to all these questions is a leader who has the vision to bring change and do things for the greater good.
When we talk about leadership at the micro level, we are generally considering the leaders in an industry, can be a CEO or President. They are the ones looked up to by each and every employee of the company. And I totally agree that instilling a feeling of cooperation instead of competition will lead to more effective leadership. For instance, if we consider companies like Apple and Samsung, they definitely realise that their vision can't be achieved single-handedly. Even Apple is using Samsung chips in its devices for a more effective product development despite Apple and Samsung are the toughest competitors in the mobile industry. Hence, clearly this is where cogent leadership abilities come into play. Cooperation is kept above competition for the greater good.
The society altogether needs to understand its interdependency and work together to bring changes that mullify the entire human race. Instead of being calumny towards its competitors, the young leaders needs to interpret and see what can be learnt from them, what improvisations can be made to enhance their ways of working. They need to realise that one and one is eleven and mutual cooperation can double their profits. Just imagine how amazing it would be if all like minded leaders join hands together and fight to make this world better. Why to go far off when we have such an terrific example nearby. I am talking about none other than the organisation named United Nations, the name itself has the word "United", quite self-explanatory, isn't it? Well, this is one organization which comprises of most able leaders who cohesively work together to put an end to the issues of global level.
At last, I would like to underscore cooperation over competition and strongly agree that the young people should instilled with the same. They are the future, the next generation. If they are guided on the correct path, it is likely that they will help the coming generations to work on the similar pathway and help in achieving their vision as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...car, even if one is missing, the Nation cant advance. And it is very important for a...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ro. Leadership demands both cooperation as well as competition. A perfect blend of coopera...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ey definitely realise that their vision cant be achieved single-handedly. Even Apple...
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Line 9, column 580, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...er. Why to go far off when we have such an terrific example nearby. I am talking a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...s;United', quite self-explanatory, isnt it? Well, this is one organization whic...
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...t? Well, this is one organization which comprises of most able leaders who cohesively work ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, second, so, still, thus, well, for instance, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2782.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 576.0 442.535393258 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82986111111 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89897948557 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79503105382 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510416666667 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 881.1 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0103832332 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7333333333 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144597598301 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364673675692 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356264420304 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714469805296 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289087060852 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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