The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The topic is trying to convey the need for cooperation over competition and is urging people to inculcate a sense of cooperation in the young generation, instead of the feeling of competition. I am in agreement with the author because I feel that competition only creates asperity between the competitors and in a long run causes a society to degenerate. On the other hand, proper cooperation between individuals allows their relationship to foster which will eventually morph a society into a better place to live.
Relationships are developed when people solve problems together, not by being a problem for one another. In a class of students, a student considers another student his friend only if the other student has helped him in some way and not if the other student has posed a challenge to him in any ways.
Competition causes a society to develop at a faster pace, we can't deny this fact. When people are competing against one another, they are pushed to do better in their field. This eventually causes efficiency in working and society gets served better this way. However, a society where everyone is pushing each other, no matter how developed it is, is not a one that people would like to live in. A life in such a society would be a stressful one. This is the reason why people living in large cities are not always as happy as people living in a rustic village.
Competition drives people to involve in criminal activities. In our society, most people feel a competition for earning money. This competitive feeling is what drives them to involve in unscrupulous activities such as theft and corruption. Similarly, a government driven by the competition for power ends up being a corrupt government that can't do well for the society. Even if the government does well, the competitive feeling of the opposition party never lets them get acknowledged for the good deeds done by them.
Summing up the points, cooperation and friendship is the best policy to lead a society. A feeling of competition is acerbic to any society and may be called beneficial only if it is a healthy one and is devoid of any dishonesty. Thus, morality and cooperation are the virtues that should be instilled in the future generations so that those principles become the guiding principles of the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...society to develop at a faster pace, we cant deny this fact. When people are competi...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ends up being a corrupt government that cant do well for the society. Even if the go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, similarly, so, still, thus, well, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88549618321 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85361667929 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519083969466 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3892397364 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.052631579 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6842105263 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234428192235 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067544150925 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039342081178 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113795271148 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356213810726 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.8971910112 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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