The argument that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in any field is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition is absolutely correct. A leader is the person who takes the team to the path of glory.
Leadership is a really important yet difficult quality to achieve in the modern world where people are running behind success, ready to compete with anybody who's coming in their way. But in the field where collective progress is utmost priority like in sports team, industry, government etc. leadership has a major role.
A leader is an important element of the team who shows the path, encourages the team and helps the people to refocus and concentrate to bounce back from any failure. A leader is not selfish to grab the opportunity for himself and runs away, rather helps the team and indirectly the organisation for which they are working for as a team.
For making a leader, the society should focus on instilling the sense of cooperation, not competition. Competition is where individuals thrive and show their talent, it makes them ahead of the rest of the people and shows what extra they can bring to the table. Whereas cooperation brings out the leader amongst the mass. It tells people that together they can achieve an even better result and thrive along with the cause they are working for. And when a group or team is involved, a leader steps up to guide the team to success.
Where individuals can show their talent in a competition but a failure can set them back but in a team, the teammates and the leader is there to help the individual bounce back faster. Generally seen in sports, a leader is not the person who is the most skillful player, but is the person who can be there and vocally present when the team is going through thick and thin. The sense of cooperation is the basic but the most important factor in leadership. Especially in the government sector where the person leads for the development of the city/town or sometimes the whole country. Sense of cooperation doesn't make the leader to strive for individual glory or any other corruption. They think for the country and for the people who are in one way or another depending on the person who is leading the country along with the government of the country.
Leadership is not a quality which is inborn, it is made and perfected. Times will be there where the leader will have opportunities to look for his/her own good and run away but the preparation from younger age in the sense of cooperation not competition will help to get a better and more responsible leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... success, ready to compete with anybody whos coming in their way. But in the field w...
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...what extra they can bring to the table. Whereas cooperation brings out the leader among...
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...the whole country. Sense of cooperation doesnt make the leader to strive for individua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, still, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69414316703 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61348589708 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438177874187 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3616362888 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.05 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320942841681 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105557466621 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146690504405 0.0758088955206 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195800815034 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153345156044 0.0667264976115 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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