There comes a time in one's life when he has to make a decision about something. That period can be as trivial as deciding food option or as serious as life or death. So decision making is one of the most important things in one's life. So while making a decision an individual should be focused and calm.
Making a decision based on emotion is not a fruitful one and sometimes can be the most regretful one. Whenever an individual's emotions get heavy, he should take some time and then rationally think of the outcomes before proceeding for any work let alone decision making. Things done based on emotions results in failure or even a catastrophic result.
One can sometimes understand that people can sometimes be forced to make decisions based on emotion but the worst thing is when those people try to justify the decision with logic afterward. There is no rational thinking involved when these logics are presented for the aforementioned decisions. It shows plain ignorance and delusional thinking of the individual when they try to justify the emotional decision. An example is when a person is angry when deciding what to do in the vacations and chooses not to go anywhere and after calming down still saying that the decision was correct because it would be better to sleep off the vacation shows the stubbornness and poor decision making. These kinds of decision making are poor as it shows the ignorance and stubbornness of the individual.
People like the abovementioned should learn to identify their mistake while they made when they took a decision based on emotion and should learn to rectify it rather than showing the world that it was correct with their delusionary logics. They should learn to correct this habit so that they don't make a horrible decision and have to live with it for the rest of their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81329113924 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59200784079 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496835443038 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.404153923 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.642857143 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271690312477 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105879723616 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06781653478 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168268891996 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472460747033 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.