The argument in the memo made by the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company is a fair one but there are some questions which could challenge it.
First question is whether the past year was a difficult year for the country economically? This question is an assumption but can be the case if fewer people attended the movies than in any other year. This states that there could be an unrest in the country regarding the economic conditions which didn't allow many people to enjoy movies as they used to. There can also be a case where the country has difficult relation with a certain country and the movies were made in that country which made people to boycott it for political reasons.
Second question is, was the movie theatre needing any construction makeover? There might be a case that the movie hall might have got damaged, and there was a need of renovation which made a few parts of theatre inaccesible. There can also be a case that the production company didn't even start the renovation hence the damaged theatre was boycotted by the movie goers.
Another question might be that the movies which got a positive reviews were not so loved by the crowd? There can be a case where a movie got high critical acclaims but the movie goers were not thrilled because the movie was not of their type. This is an issue which affects the movie business, that the movie with very positive reviews are sometimes the movies labelled boring by the audience.
One question might be of the movie ticket price, as the Production Company might be shelling out money so that they can play great positive review movies which in turn increased the ticket price affecting viewers. Movie ticket prices when suddenly increases, the viewers tend to boycott the movies till the prices lowers down.
If all the above questions are answered and the Super Screen Movie Production Company reviews every other possible questions and finds that these are not the affecting factors then the recommendation in the memo from the advertising director is to be taken seriously and should be quickly acted upon.
Essay evaluation report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 366 350
No. of Characters: 1722 1500
No. of Different Words: 163 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.374 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.705 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.378 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.211 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.401 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.705 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...regarding the economic conditions which didnt allow many people to enjoy movies as th...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...o be a case that the production company didnt even start the renovation hence the dam...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, regarding, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.6327345309 148% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 55.5748502994 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 364.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83791208791 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4064099358 2.78398813304 86% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 204.123752495 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447802197802 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 705.55239521 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2004233199 57.8364921388 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.785714286 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.70786347227 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159117715871 0.218282227539 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675606480842 0.0743258471296 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626455967284 0.0701772020484 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108443010099 0.128457276422 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738664309229 0.0628817314937 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.32208582834 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 98.500998004 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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