Author have suggested that if a society wants to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other field in best way is by teaching them a sense of cooperation. Author have also suggested to refrain society for instilling a sense of competition for its young people.
I would agree to author claim to expose the younger generation to teaching of cooperation skill so they could be prepared for leading government, industry, or other field. By doing so we will be making sure that one of the most fundamental base of being a leader is incorporated in younger generation. As we know, leadership is a quality not many have and even if a person is a leader, it doesn't necessarily means that the person has experience in leadership or has proper skills required to lead a group of people. For example, in United Nations meeting, whenever there is a discussion of climate change, there is no stand for global warming, everyone is divided when it comes to take decision for preventing disaster in upcoming years due to warming. Powerful nations like United States, China and Russia have failed in sense of leadership because they couldn't unite all of the nation for the stand against global warming. Cooperation required between the nation to tackle climate change was not present and these lead to plight where half are against the mission to tackle global warming and other half are bolstering the mission.
It is pivotal that we teach younger generation a sense of cooperation so that they do not make same mistake as us and are ready to cooperate in future if we are facing much dire problems. By making sure that the younger generation cooperate with each other, the only issue we would we left with is how to resolve the problem our planet or our nation as whole is facing. Although it can be said that cooperation is required for leadership quality but we also do require to make sure that the other leadership quality like critical reasoning, personable quality, morals are present in a person or people so they could lead others for betterment of our society. Younger generation needs to be instilled with such qualities as well to make sure that they do not lack in any way whih could lead to failure of them as a leader.
As much I would agree with author on instilling younger generation with sense of cooperation, we have to also consider whether the sense of competition will help them being a better leader. For example, if we consider Elon Musk who is one of the eminent leader in the world successfully lead his two prestigious company that is SpaceX and Tesla as one of the most valued company in the world. He was able to do that by not just cooperation with his team but also because he has wild sense of competition. Whenever he is launching something innovative, Elon Musk makes sure that his company is the first one to make the rocket or a vehicle and that too in a impractical deadline. A sense of competition is also required so that a person is able to lead the industry or any other field without being left behind because of lack of passion of competition. Elon Musk is a prime example why we also need a sense of competition. Though it is required we need to make sure that we teach our younger generation that they compete in a much healthier manner and do not cause harm to each other our our society in any way.
I would agree with the author claim that we need to instill the sense of cooperationamong younger generation but we also have to exposure them to have healthier competition among themselves which would helpp with the betterment of our government, industry or any other field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...in government, industry, or other field in best way is by teaching them a sense of coop...
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Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested refraining'.
Suggestion: suggested refraining
... sense of cooperation. Author have also suggested to refrain society for instilling a sense of compe...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ve and even if a person is a leader, it doesnt necessarily means that the person has e...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...led in sense of leadership because they couldnt unite all of the nation for the stand a...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...f leadership because they couldnt unite all of the nation for the stand against global war...
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Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
...adership quality but we also do require to make sure that the other leadership quality ...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to be' or 'be'.
Suggestion: to be; be
...the sense of competition will help them being a better leader. For example, if we con...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the rocket or a vehicle and that too in a impractical deadline. A sense of compet...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: our
...ner and do not cause harm to each other our our society in any way. I would agree wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 33.0505617978 203% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3008.0 2235.4752809 135% => OK
No of words: 643.0 442.535393258 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67807153966 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03561760524 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66818737996 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.379471228616 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 969.3 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1242359356 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.4 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.15 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215775657526 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857108291663 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097132216792 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168579786764 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11489702637 0.0667264976115 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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