The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
People say that cooperation between two can solve any problem. yes, this is true. But in the sentence given by the author he says that for leadership in government, industry, or other fields there should be sense of cooperation, not competition. I do not agree with the author in this statement. yes, cooperation is an essential part of leadership but competition is also equally important. there are many essential parts of leadership like honesty, discipline, dedication, determination etc. so, We can say that cooperation and competition are the two of many components of leadership.
In earlier time when dictatorship was prevalent, there was no competition between government to fight for the votes. there was only one man ruling the country. and due to which all the difficulties faced by country could not be solved. many were not even considered. But now, many government parties fight for the power and everyone has their own ideas to run the nation. if these government parties cooperate and come into common grounds for ruling the party then there would be no difference between dictatorship and democracy in terms of developing the country. Then many of the problems faced by a country will be left untouched. So the parties fight for the seat and the ideals which match with common people's ideals gets the maximum vote and that party wins.
In industries if there was no competition, no company would have reached at the heights they are today. In industries the level of cooperation should be that much in which one company is not using malicious techniques to destroy his competition. The main part in this field is competition. There is no growth if there is no sense of competition between companies. in an example of Orkut and Facebook, now Facebook is a giant in social media world. There was a time when Orkut used to lead the social media world. But due to Mark Zuckerberg's talent and competition winning Startegy now Facebook is leading. If he would have thought of cooperation in this field he might not have been this successful he is today.
In sports too, the two teams playing there is a sense of competition which leads to the winning of one team. Two team fight for the trophy and at the end only one wins. If two teams are playing a game there is for sure that only one will win the trophy or a medal. But if the teams show cooperation between them then there will be no winning. So sense of competition is important in field of sports.
Yes, cooperation is an important part for leadership in every field but there are many components of leadership and competition on is one of the most essential part. until competition is not used for any malicious practices the healthy sense of competition define the true leader in any endeavors. So I do not agree with the author who wrote for leadership in government, industry, or other field cooperation is only required and not competition and young people should be prepared for leadership in any field with instilling in them the sense of cooperation as well as competition.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263066202091 0.240241500013 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.157235817809 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0644599303136 0.0880659088768 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0487804878049 0.0497285424764 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0209059233449 0.0444667217837 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1393728223 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0348432055749 0.0406280797675 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81644159291 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0121951219512 0.030933414821 39% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102787456446 0.0997080785238 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0226480836237 0.0249443105267 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0121951219512 0.0148568991511 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3073.0 2732.02544248 112% => OK
No of words: 526.0 452.878318584 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84220532319 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.283269961977 0.366273622748 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226235741445 0.280924506359 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169201520913 0.200843997647 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142585551331 0.132149295362 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81644159291 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 219.290929204 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.393536121673 0.48968727796 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.151947178 55.4138127331 81% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6194690265 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.9677419355 23.380412469 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5371678552 59.4972553346 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1290322581 141.124799967 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9677419355 23.380412469 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.290322580645 0.674092028746 43% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.21349557522 403% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 39.59131608 51.4728631049 77% => OK
Elegance: 2.05737704918 1.64882698954 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465133759572 0.391690518653 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131918447571 0.123202303941 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102230529893 0.077325440228 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475978907921 0.547984918172 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150327018795 0.149214159877 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152385235951 0.161403998019 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108616469017 0.0892212321368 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.34657980949 0.385218514788 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0646698045946 0.0692045440612 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326022413347 0.275328986314 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103615014098 0.0653680567796 159% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.4325221239 163% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 26.0 13.5995575221 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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