The best way for the society to prepare its young people in leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
To become a leader is a massive job, and this job is of high responsibility. But if people are trained from a young age to develop the leadership qualities, then they can be great leaders in any field. The qualities in a good leader should be of taking the team ahead with themselves, and also to respect the other teams or opponents. Thus people at a young age should be instilled with the sense of cooperation rather than competition, thereby making them great leaders.
In school, we play team games like cricket , football , etc. and we always choose a leader or a captain for the team, who can manage the team well, as well as give support to the team when needed and treat the game and the opponent team with respect. These qualities will be present in a leader who believes in cooperation and healthy competition and thus the people of the society should prepare people from a young age with these qualities.
The Prime Minister of a country is choosen by the people of the country.The people vote for that candidate in which they see a sense of responsibilty , compassion , and calmness, a person who can take the country ahead and also look for leadership quality. The Prime Minister of India, Narendra Modi, who kept good realtions as well as a healthy competion with other foreign countries, and also improving the standards of India, thereby potraying himself as a strong and successful leader, which made him win the elections of 2019.
The people of the society should prepare its young people for leadership, but they should show them the role and importance of a leader, the resposiblity the leader has, and the sense of cooperation and healthy competition a leader should have. There should be competition but not a brutal one, which prevents the growth of the individual and the people around them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, then, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 55.5748502994 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 2260.96107784 66% => OK
No of words: 315.0 441.139720559 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77142857143 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66443665499 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479365079365 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 705.55239521 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.67365269461 478% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7921771451 57.8364921388 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.636363636 119.503703932 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 23.324526521 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.70786347227 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186681289267 0.218282227539 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765369785199 0.0743258471296 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585792112598 0.0701772020484 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123118858276 0.128457276422 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454126313254 0.0628817314937 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.3799401198 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 48.3550499002 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 12.197005988 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 98.500998004 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.