Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
We live in an era of mordenization. As the world is growing, the orthodox view of women are only suited for household chores is now changing. We are entering into the period where men and women are no longer treated differently. Women are at par woth men at all tasks, even though they have their physical differences.This change has led to increase in women employment and the women have become more independent.Women are well suited at performig all the tasks(physical and mental) which cen be performed by men.
It was a misconception that women are weaker than men, infact they are in many cases stronger than men.Kalpana Chawla, an astronout at NASA, was amoung the first women to walk on the moon,this was in 1949.Her family was against the thought that she a women cannot or rather won't be able to go on moon,but she proved everyone wrong. If women in the 1949 can go on the moon,they can definately perform all the task that men can,as walking on the moon is not a piece of cake.
Another example, is of Geeta Kumari Phagot, an Indian wrestler, who had a goal of getting a gold medal for India in the olympics in wrestling.In India it was believed that only men can wrestle and women are suited for household work.But she worked very hard since she was a kid and with this assiduous attitude and arduous efforts, she was able to achieve her goal.This indicates that women and men inspite of their physical differences can do the same task.There are many more examples which depict that women and men can perform the same task.
Women have grown in all the fields be it related to physical(weightlifting, boxing, etc.) or mental (CEO's of companies,teacher ,etc.) work and they have achieved as much as men.I find it hard to believe that in todays world, there is no task which a women cannot do.Men have also reached to the acme of success and so has women. Many companies in thw world have founders and CEO's as women,so they are equally suited for all the tasks, inspite of t
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59604519774 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76289238374 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.31930441 60.3974514979 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.909090909 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1818181818 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204874900534 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802168311053 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057145124739 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137506544513 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410217973777 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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