"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Sense of cooperation is an important factor in becoming a good leader. A leader who is competitive but lack a sense of cooperation sounds like a recipe for trouble within companies or political arena. Nevertheless, the claim that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for any field is to instill in them a sense of cooperation instead of competition is too simplistic. Wanting to achieve better economic growth and wellness of its people can be a great motivation for a political leader to come up with brilliant policies for people, and trying to become the most successful company within an industry can motivate a company leader to work harder. A leader that lacks a sense of competition will have as much motivation to do so.
Some might argue that a sense of cooperation is the most crucial factor for a leader to have in order to make the society a better place. Instead of competing with other companys trying to hog all the profit within an industry, a CEO may cooperate with smaller companies to share ideas and achieve a win-win result. However, while achieving a larger good for the society as a whole is important, a great leader should care about the wellness of his people before being philanthropic.
President Trump of the United States can be seen as a president who lacks a sense of cooperation while he is always eager to win other nations and political counterparts. While he seems adamant and nonsense sometimes, he is a successful entrepreneur and statistical results show that the U.S is economically flourishing. While it is true that he is also a cause of many international issues such as trade wars and immigration issues, he may be considered a great leader by many U.S citizens who are benefitting from economic wellness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80327868852 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92113300038 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511475409836 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3474375466 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.181818182 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 5.21951772744 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156096050759 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704557764832 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907637974875 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102808231781 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702306438517 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.