The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
The author of the statement asserts that having sense of cooperation is more important than competition for any leader in government, industry or any other field. Hence, it is best way to prepare young people of society by instilling them a sense of cooperation, not competition. I agree with the author's statement as it is defensible from both normative and empirical standpoint.
Statement tries to build relationship between a good leader and cooperation among leader and people(whom he is leading). It is a leader who is responsible for performance of the people whom he is leading. For example, status of any state in the country which includes financial stability, standard of living, employment rates etc. depends upon leader of that state in direct or indirect way. As he will have rights to make any major change in the policies. Thus, leader in order to have good judgement and take actions in favor of welfare of people, need an understanding of stregth and weakness plus few more factors of people under him.
Furthermore, elaborating on point mentioned previously, to understand people and their strength and weakness leader need to experience problems faced by them. Cooperation helps leader to experience them personally. For example, In a factory producing metal utensils, process involves multiple steps that includes heating of metal then purifying it by various process, molding, colling etc. This process requires large number of people to coordinate each other for making final product. Leader who has designed this process of making final product if cooperates with employee, by cooperation means to perform daily activities done by them. He might get few ideas to improve it in some or the other way. Even small improvement in one of the process can save considerable amount of money for industry.
Additionally, cooperation also builds trust between the leader and people under him. When people know that leader have an idea of struggle that we are facing and is helping to improve our life, that eventually leads in building trust among them. However, when there is continuous sense of competition people might be pressurised.
Some people might argue that, competition helps in improving performance and progress.Though, it is true for a leader to understand people is more important than their competition in order to have overall growth and welfare of society.
In the sum, however there are argument to be made from both the sides, It is more
cogent argument to have sense of coopration among young people than sense of competition to become good leaders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tition to become good leaders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, then, thus, as to, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21904761905 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85773406582 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502380952381 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5445927087 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.380952381 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298716119104 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912951796845 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101528865946 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147864330121 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113668065785 0.0667264976115 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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