The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition
Cooperation and competition are two distinct behavorial traits which can help an individual to grow based on their particular distinct nature. But, leaders in any particular field needs to be co-operative for the growth of the society. Because sometimes, competitive anture can prove destructive for both the individual and the society as a whole.
Firstly, person must be open to new ideas, be willing to change his strong held beliefs if they are found to be incorrect. These are the traits of a cooperative individual. Young people should be taught the importance of contrasting views when they are opposed. Instead of competing with them in rather unhealthy manner, young people should realize that this is there chance to learn and grow.
Furthermore, A cooperative person can help others grow too, in the duration of himself becoming more and more successful. A cooperative leader carry along with him, his entire team towards the path of success
Take for instance, the CEO of the company who listens to the trails and tribulations of most of his employees. He cooperates and tries to understand his employees and change the triublesome situations his employees are facing if needed, wouldn't all his employees be happy? Every individual will want to work in such a firm where he is valued. Where their seniors and alibi know the individual's importance, value what he brings to the table and cooperate with him by understanding his position.
Some would argue that if the leaders are extra cooperative to all the things, people might take advantage of them. Therefore, a thin line exists in understanding the difference between being cooperative and being submissive or a yes/man. If the situation arises the individual should understand where to draw that line. Take for instance, CEO of the company realizes that his employees are trying to take undue advantage of him, he must not cooperate under such circumstances. And by instilling cooperation, it doesn't mean that the person will become ignorant of people trying to doing malicious/decietful practices against him. He must cooperate but, when the situation arises, he must know that this is the time to fight, rather than being laid back. The King Martin Luther once quoted, "The people who passively cooperate with evil are just as much responsible as those perpetrating it"
I acknowledge that competitive spirit can help individuals to grow. But, when this competition blows out of proportion no one can estimate and in case of leaders, if it blows out it can prove detrimental to the entire society. Hence, cooperation must be instilled in youngsters from young age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1879350348 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93964129581 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522041763341 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8276346499 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.476190476 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5238095238 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178729683606 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577891232208 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405658972883 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944411423987 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366858046271 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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