"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
The society is the amalgamation of various type of people of dynamic vision, capability and infuence. The qualities of human are developed through the pragemtic experinces, lessons of life and handling the situations with foresight. Development is not only depend upon the individual interst but also the community contribution which lead to certain direction for better understanding and future. some may argue that competetion will enhance the qualituy of being successful but, it alsosometimes demotivate people and discourange them from leadership which is crestfallen. Thus, I strongly believe that, cooperation is the best and dominant way to encourage its young people for leadership quality rather than comeptition with the following three reasons.
Firstly, human mentality always develop on the basis of things which he percive, experince and learn through pragmetic solutions. despite of any field history proves the example of team cooperation rather than team competetition. For instance, in construction projects the coordination and cooperation is very important than competetition because if one might leading the direction with race he can face consequences can happen debacle. Every human input determines the product or output from the project. for construction the building architect, engineer, project manager and client should go with process coherently and inched it by cooperation. If any of them start the competetion to complete his job then eventually project will fail.
Secondly, in schools and colleges professors always taught us the importance of team building like one can broke simple wooden stick but, it is very difficult to broke same buch of sticks. This example can be taken from past like independence story of India. people aroused voice against colonist all together where unity wins. In that case if any leader eant to compete with other will be foolish and lead to sever threath for himself. Unity always speaks for community even in contemperary example like socirty problem. For example fighting against the residential colony problems one might sound weak to find the solution foe that but, when whole colony villify for the problem it impacts far louder than one voice.
Moreover, team building examples very often and quotidianin our day today life. the work of ant colony is very incentive and inspiring example of team building other than copmpetition. However, one might argue that competition is eather conducive than cooperation than it boosts one's confidence in terms of leadership but in that sence it will impact other side who loose the competition so this statement dose not hold the water.
In totality, one must respect other for his contribution not juct for competing but cooperating with other and realize the importance of teambuilding irrespective of any field like government, industry or any other stream.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 12.9106741573 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2431.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4384787472 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88827400553 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574944071588 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 765.0 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0795584251 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.761904762 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257205749633 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651752105598 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696560500114 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147494948576 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680152386732 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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