Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.
Everyone want's to achieve a good lifestyle after studies, and hardworking. Bread and butter become a more prominent thing in one's life. I think earning a considerable amount of money and living a regular lifestyle is a better option than earning a lot of money.
However, critics may maintain that earning a lot of money is the solution to all the problems. But, I think living a lifestyle with a regular income in which all factors are important like family time, personal time, and financial stability.
Hence I strongly agree with the second part of the statement that earning a considerable amount of money for comfortable living is conducive and inveterate for one's growth, and development for the following three reasons.
Firstly, earning a lot of money needs a lot of hard work, extra work, overtime, and many more. There can be multiple ways of earning money like legal, illegal and it can include a risk. For an instant, my friend's younger brother was earning a raft amount of money in just two years after passing out from the university. Initially, everyone was so happy for his achievements and progress in his career. But, later on, down the line his activities for his family become a suspicious act that he seems to be included in some illegal
trade or something. This includes a lot of risk factors, and not going to end once involved in such unauthorized trade. Hence, even though if one making a lot of money there should be a proper legal way to do it.
Secondly, Earning more money makes a person stressed, and angry, and sometimes sabotages his own personality. It makes a person more responsible, and it may turn into a headache. The person may not be able to get time for family or personal time. For example, My uncle was working in a big apple cooperate firm. After four-five years he used to do overtime and lives in the office only. Because of this, he was not able to spend time with his family slowly inched by inched their family relation starts falling apart.
Moreover, running behind the money is flagging and exhausting which eliminates happiness from one's life. So, do a job which you love the most even though if it's not high paying but, one can enjoy it. my friend wants to be a teacher even though it was not a high paying job
he persuaded the teaching degree for his joy and happiness.
In totality, money can't buy everything so that living a comfortable life than just running behind the money is always better, and a safe option anytime so that one can enjoy their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66966292135 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54279965234 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501123595506 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3666301453 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.347826087 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.347826087 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26086956522 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163587217537 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498075483499 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478250325969 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787174305954 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465166183092 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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