"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
To become a leader in any field like governement, industry,and other fields requres plethora of qualities. A leader should have qualities like integrity, gratitude, empathy, respect, courage. Leader should be able to communicate well, he should be cooperative in nature as well as he must be competitive.
A great leader is defined by many characters like discussed in above paragraphs but, here two qualities cooperation and competition are in focus. Today's young generation is going to be the future's leaders. They are going to lead the next generation and influence with their qualities. In any field, it maybe government, industry or any other field a leader should always be cooperative. If we cooperate with someone then only they are going to cooperate with us in future. Cooperation is a quality which helps define the person's nature, if a leader has helping nature, it is goingto help him overcome many problems. Our Nation's leaders are very cooperative towards each other. For example, India's Prime Mininster, Mr. Narendra Modi, he identified the opportunities in being cooperative, during COVID 19 pandemic he offered medicines to American Government in order to help them fight COVID 19. His gesture influenced many other governments to help each other. This even gavepolitical benefits to Indian Government.
On the other hand, the second quality, competition, is as much important as cooperation. Many will argue that competition is not required in a leader. If a leader is not competitive enough he will not sustain himself against the rivals. He should be competitive enough to analyze the flaws of opposite team and use it to improve his abilities which will definitely help him to succeed. On the contrary, if leader is overcompetitve, it will jeopradize his stand against his rivals. Moreover, being overcompetitive can hamper the people following him. For an instance, if any indusry's leader is a very overcompetitive, and he takes a foolish decision just to show his rivals what he can do, then if the decision fails, it will affect the company. It can lead to lose his customers,loss in business. However, every person has his level of competency.Fields like sports, person needs to be competitive in order to get success.
To sum up, being cooperative helps the leader to grow, and being competitive will help the leader to sustain himself in the market. On th other hand, leader should be competitive and not overcompetitve.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , and
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... a leader should always be cooperative. If we cooperate with someone then only the...
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Suggestion: in the future
...nly they are going to cooperate with us in future. Cooperation is a quality which helps d...
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ion is a quality which helps define the persons nature, if a leader has helping nature,...
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...ompetition is not required in a leader. If a leader is not competitive enough he w...
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...very person has his level of competency.Fields like sports, person needs to be competi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, well, for example, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17587939698 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10678772959 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522613065327 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8027614634 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8333333333 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150614608428 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473792900305 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356036999966 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949167995826 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433060892701 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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