The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree wi

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

Sustaining and surviving in todays society is a tedious and painstaking task, every now and then we have to face compition whith others to make our stand. The issue suggests that, the best way for a society to preare its young children for leadership in government or any sector is by installing in them a sence of coopertation and not competition. In my openion, I disagree with this statement, as this might not be the case. To sustain in contemprary society we need to have compition whith other human being to make our stand.

Without competition in todays world we cannot put forth our point or our contention on a perticular topic of interest or field. Everyone is struggeling to acquire their position in society and achieve their goals of leadership in government, indusrty or any other field. Without competitive feeling in their behaviour or a passion to win over other, will not help them ot aquire their goals. If an individual leans on cooperation with the other party, then he might not be able to freely withstand his motives, he might be under constant berdon of others. For example, if an party wans to establish their government ans takes the path of coopertaion with other party with diffrent motives. Then cooperation would not work at all in this case as their motives clash and would not be able to take a stand on perticualr ploblem. Thus, we cannot solely prefer cooperation over competition.

Competiton helps us to face any problem which we need to tackel with unique and innovative solutions. It helps us to develope our pillpower and confdence in ourselves as we need to appose others stand and build our own. Without comparing our results with others, wont help us in building the compassion to produce much more quality and warrented results then others. For example, if a student who get 85 over 100 in his examination and feels satisfied with the marks. Then he won't be able to suceed in his life, as he would be satisfied with his 25% less marks form the topper who got full marks and didin't compared it with the one who got higher marks then him. This kind of behaviour will block the innovative thinking and passion to be the topper of the class and avhieve goals of securing an higher position in industry or any other sector.

Of course, onw may say solely dependent on compitioin might not help to achieve all the targets. At some point we need to cooperate and work in unison to find a solution on a complicated problem. But, we should analize and think over our desigion before commiting to it. As others might think as a chance to destroy us.

In conclusion, cooperation cannot be the solution to sustain and be the leader of the filed. Competition plays an important role in makeing building our stand.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...iety is a tedious and painstaking task, every now and then we have to face compition whith others ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...preare its young children for leadership in government or any sector is by instal...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...stant berdon of others. For example, if an party wans to establish their governmen...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...the class and avhieve goals of securing an higher position in industry or any othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, kind of, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2275.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71991701245 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63384255396 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477178423237 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.610511085 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9130434783 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9565217391 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30434782609 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143504049694 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447289053242 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521497994394 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822889966824 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550125715059 0.0667264976115 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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