To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Society plays an important role in shaping lifes of an individual and is at the heart to developeing ones stand in society. The prompt suggests that to deveiop an understanding about a society, one must study its major or important cities. In my opinion, I diagree with the author as the characteristics of major cities can guile us in thinking only about the positives abiut the societies and hide its counter point.
To start with, the study of societies reveal the most about its human behaviour and its upbringing of its citizen as the environment around us play an important role in shaping our personality. So by studing only about its mojor cities or the oneswhich are developed and alread have overcomed its problems will not help us to evaluate its real problems. For instance, a society in major city as Delhi : capital of India, is one of the most developed and major city in India. Most of its societies have open mindset and can easily find appropriate solution for problem and its development have developed its scieties which no longer needs to fight and face some of the major issues faced by a less developed or backward city as Nashik, a small town in westen India. Which still believes in its backward, outdated societal believes and traditions. Such type of problems cannot be recognised while only studing the high class societied ahich will only reveal its good side.
Additionally, societies of major cities have to chase diffrent problems as compared to other less developed societies. For example, the quality and exposure of education system in a small villege or town will be diffrent as compared to a major city. Which will lead to drastic change in its upbringing and the way of finding a solution to querry. Even the exposure and different innovative ways the modern students find in major cities cannot receive this kind of knowledge in small thown students. Thus, solely depending on the understanding the behaviour of major cities will lead to compromised result.
Of course one might argue that, the vast majority of a countries development is evaluated by its society in the major city. So what is the important of minor ones? But this might not be the case, as overall devlopment is the key to success. Therefore, to evaluate and characterize the society we need an overall perspective of the nation and not just the major ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: the surrounding environment
...ur and its upbringing of its citizen as the environment around us play an important role in shaping our p...
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Line 3, column 657, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...which no longer needs to fight and face some of the major issues faced by a less developed ...
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Line 3, column 822, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...eves in its backward, outdated societal believes and traditions. Such type of problems c...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ight argue that, the vast majority of a countries development is evaluated by its society...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, kind of, of course, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87376237624 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70006068338 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487623762376 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0667899652 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.388888889 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249575576326 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088032760595 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490057792293 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156815518917 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426584517236 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.