What is the best way to succeed in any field? Cooperating and collaborating with people, right? It enhances our vision and we get to the zenith of our forte. The prompt suggests that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in any field is to make them understand the value of cooperation and not competition. In my opinion, I mostly agree to this claim for several reasons. Yes for obvious reasons there are some exceptions that will challenge my support and it is cogent to address those too.
To begin with, people who are good with collaborating with each other are more likely to succeed. In this competing world, everyone possess some unique skills and when you cooperate with each other, you strive to learn those things and get better at it knowingly or unknowingly. Let's say for example the two biggest tech giant of the world- Apple and Samsung, both the companies are at the pinnacle of tech field but still they cooperate with each other as Samsung provides their camera and OLED's to Apple and Apple helps the former one for security purposes. So cooperating really helps if one is able to see the bigger picture.
In addition to this, from childhood one is taught is to compete with others and get ahead of them. This competeting behaviour which is inculcated in every human makes them to go far away from the learning process. Instead, if young people are taught to learn things from people who are better than you at something, one will be able to expand his or her horizon to the greatest level. For instance, This pandemic was the greatest example of cooperation and making things work as number of scientist and doctors worked together on vaccine and foiled the virus by producing vaccine.
In contrast to my other two points, yes I believe there are some exceptions which will challenge my positions and I respect those exceptions. Like, it is equally true competition challenges us and make us better in what we do. It is the competition which allows one to think about innovative ideas to get ahead of in this competiting world. So yes, when you compete, you give it everything in the process and thrive for the success. This passion and zeal to get work done make things possible and healthy competetion surely is one of the good aspect of it.
So to sum up my point, as I said earlier I mostly agree to the cooperating and collaborating part with each other to get better and work in harmonius manner but at the same time there are exceptions which challenges it and it's plausible to respect that and work in required manner to get success in life or for that matter in any field we work and thrive for the best.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2203.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6281512605 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50843767132 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478991596639 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.5467376789 60.3974514979 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.15 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288054594967 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868412126944 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779634645371 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169553803459 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552355947545 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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