The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The issue of whether or not the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in various fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperatopn, not competition is a contentious one. Each of the side has a strength and weakness and also every person has a different sight and different position. I believe that cooperation is something that ameliorate the nation to a other higher level so, cooperation is needed to prepare a leader. Furthermore, cooperation is must for developing a young people as a leader.
From the ancient time, group working plays a valuable role in our life. Young people don't know how to manage and lead in a field. So, they always need a seniors suggestions to be more perfect in the field which he want to lead. Any government partisan cannot lead in a sole. And they cannot take decision alone as they have to think about all others situation and conditions.So, group woking is something that cannot be avaded.
A young people can make a future nation as a leader so they mst have to be sincere about all things beside them. Industry cannot be run alone as any developing issues can be only solved by congruited people. A leader of a industry have a knowledge about their position. He cannot be a manager, a staff and other vocation at the same time. So, young people should be taught about sharing their works and develop some mentality that lonely work is not a good choice for shining.
Now our world is competative world, all people compete with each other. competition is needed for understanding one's position. Competating with a leader of other party is well but it should not fighting with others. On a contrary, being a cooperationg leader one can be more good leader. So young people should keep in mind about cooperation.
In conclusion, a sense of cooperation makes a leader a best leader for government and industry and others field. Young people keep pace with this conception that if they want to be a leader, he should be cooperative not a competitor.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Suggestion: an
...something that ameliorate the nation to a other higher level so, cooperation is n...
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...e as a leader. From the ancient time, group working plays a valuable role in o...
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...valuable role in our life. Young people dont know how to manage and lead in a field....
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...o be more perfect in the field which he want to lead. Any government partisan cannot...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...n alone as they have to think about all others situation and conditions.So, group woki...
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Suggestion: So
...out all others situation and conditions.So, group woking is something that cannot ...
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...young people can make a future nation as a leader so they mst have to be sincere ...
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...olved by congruited people. A leader of a industry have a knowledge about their p...
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Suggestion: Competition
...ld, all people compete with each other. competition is needed for understanding ones positi...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'fight'
Suggestion: fight
...f other party is well but it should not fighting with others. On a contrary, being a coo...
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Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
..., a sense of cooperation makes a leader a best leader for government and industry...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71267605634 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75414027116 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49014084507 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4087102744 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7619047619 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353002797797 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111170162906 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145109129451 0.0758088955206 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224157299053 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164640224115 0.0667264976115 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.