The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government or industry or other fields in by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition.
"United we Stand..", "One for all, and All for One," Sayings that support cooperation and unison in societies and groups. In fact, the prompt advocates for such a track where we use cooperation rather than competition in preparing our young generation for future leadership in governments and industry. I strongly agree with the above prompt for the following three reasons.
To begin with, nations are built with consensus cooperation of its people. It is their inherit desire to build a democratic prosperous and rising nation that brings together a group of different sectors for the sole benefit of their nation. For instance, the United States is a federal government where 51 states are united under one government, one leadership; yet numerous senators, house speakers that speak in the name of these different states. The welfare of each and every state is a bi-product of the whole organisation of that system. The cooperation rather than the competition among the parties is the key to the success for creation of such a nation. I admit that during elections, competition exists, and is necessary; however, the core of the system and its creation depends on the coperation of the parties concerned.
Moreover, when we talk universally and among the world nations, we are dealing with the United Nations and its role in instigating world peace or world health issues. These matters of state cannot be dealt with among different parties, especially when these nations come from a wide spectrum unless the nations concerned are willing to cooperate rather than compete. For instance, when dealing with the attacks on Syria,the United Nations took major decisons in that direction. Numerous states had directives in that concern wether political, economical or humanitarian.
Furthermore, the cooperation among political members of the state is crucial for development of the country or else the country will fall into demises. For instance, if we shed light on Lebanon, the country whose capitol was exploded on the 4th of August 2020...WHY? Due to negligence, political incompetence, lack of coordination among political parties. When the members of state fail to perform in a cooperative manner it can lead to disastrous results, such as the case of Beirut where hundreds and thousands were killed and injured... Yet, with proper education and good performance and leadership this whole mess good have been avoided.
Finally, I believe in the new generation, and unfortunately this new generation is more self absorbed and introverted due to their dependence on electronics. Therefore, we have to help them in extrapolating that energy and to work with the other in order to build the future for themselves and the ones around them ,as well as for the generations to come!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
'United we Stand..', 'One for all, and All for O...
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Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...pos;, 'One for all, and All for One,' Sayings that support cooperation and u...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
..., when dealing with the attacks on Syria,the United Nations took major decisons in t...
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Line 7, column 399, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a cooperative manner" with adverb for "cooperative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...en the members of state fail to perform in a cooperative manner it can lead to disastrous results, such...
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Line 9, column 295, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding ones'?
Suggestion: the surrounding ones
... to build the future for themselves and the ones around them ,as well as for the generations to come...
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Line 9, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... for themselves and the ones around them ,as well as for the generations to come!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2364.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 450.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25333333333 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93130906585 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528888888889 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 738.0 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1102076079 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23961991468 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696310232361 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699345906004 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137263562246 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768667507911 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.