The best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer-generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The author claims that the best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer-generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household. The author reaches this conclusion without looking any further into the possible solutions with which the problems might be solved. Of course the waste generated by a person may be controlled by the authors conclusion but it's not the only way to cut the waste generated and I would like to disagree with the author.
Firstly, it is not practically possible for a person or a consumer to control the amount of trash that is produced in their respective households. What if the trash being produced in a day exceeds the limit? They can't just hold on to the trash as it will cause a noisome filled air and might lead to several diseases. This is not at all healthy and might further lead to serious health issues.
Furthermore, instead of imposing a limit to control the environmental waste being generated one can reproduce the waste. The people of any area, i.e, a town or a city or even a rural area must be asked to separate the trash based on its material like plastic, paper, organic waste, etc. This helps the government to reproduce the waste which is generated and it may greatly help in reducing the waste being produced. Hence we can say that " The waste reproduced is the waste reduced."
Finally, the government should impose strict laws on the usage of plastic. Organic waste include the waste being generated from food, humans. These can be used as nutrients to enrich the mineral content in the soil. Other waste such as paper can easily dissolve in the soil, but plastic takes thousands of years to dissolve in the soil. Instead of imposing limit onto waste being generated from a household the govenment should impose strict laws into the amount of plastic being produced and the amount being generated. This is a major environmental threat and the government should impose such manoeuvre's as fast as possible.
The claim made by the author isn't that bad to support. It obviously reduces the amount of trash being generated by the consumer's and hence leads to the reduction in environmental waste. But it is not the best way to solve the current issue since the above mentioned reasons bypass the authors claim. Since the positive's don't outweight the negative's I would like to disagree with the authors statement that "The best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer-generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household."
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2208.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86343612335 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71745114842 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429515418502 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.230490295 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388705779609 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124569558314 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149540350278 0.0758088955206 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237702194067 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115759268125 0.0667264976115 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.