The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Write a response in which you disuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position. Author says that The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. I agree to this recommendation. Explaining, I strongly believe that the best way to teach is not to praise positive action and ignore negative ones but is makeing everyone to be a good ones. Specific crimstances lead me which adopting the recommendation as the following: First, we will lost the good children who have negative maner if we ignore them. Children are future, not all. Praise in negative should not be, teaching to children to best way. I strongly believe adopting this recommeindation would be not advantages. second, negative ones in today may be a great people in the future. Not only ones behave do worse they are teenage. Teenage in today is not easy for all! Negative ones can not better, if only prainse positive actions, ignore negativeone. Negative ones may not positive be having, but if we praise them only, they not think they should be positive person later. conclusion, specific circumstances are which adopting the recommendation would not be advantage, I am not agree to the the recommendation. Ignore negative manor when they will not be positive behavrio in futre. But they can, if do not ignore them. we should not ignor negative person but should make them think that they can be a good man future like positive person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...es but is makeing everyone to be a good ones. Specific crimstances lead me which ado...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...dation as the following: First, we will lost the good children who have negative man...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...ive should not be, teaching to children to best way. I strongly believe adopting this r...
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Suggestion: Second
...ecommeindation would be not advantages. second, negative ones in today may be a great ...
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Suggestion: Conclusion
...k they should be positive person later. conclusion, specific circumstances are which adopt...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...dation would not be advantage, I am not agree to the the recommendation. Ignore negat...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...uld not be advantage, I am not agree to the the recommendation. Ignore negative manor w...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...uld not be advantage, I am not agree to the the recommendation. Ignore negative manor w...
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Suggestion: We
...e. But they can, if do not ignore them. we should not ignor negative person but sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 58.6224719101 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 284.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99647887324 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88937362837 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447183098592 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8603586361 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4705882353 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.82352941176 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40437499198 0.243740707755 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133106434685 0.0831039109588 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159987709327 0.0758088955206 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.40437499198 0.150359130593 269% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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