The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. You should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
teaching is indubiously a sedulous task.Whether it be a child or an adult, at every stage of life there is something to learn which must be taught in a axiomatic manner. The prompt recommends that the best way to teach is to belabor on praising the positive activities and shun the licentous activities for the betterment in the long run. In my opinion, I, strongly agree to this statement for two reasons.
To begin with, the teaching system should maintain a proper etiquette for developing rapproachment among the students among the student. teachers, being forthcoming with the students, will unimpeachably develop a convival bond with them. Hence , contributing to hearken the teacher warily. , a intransigent child who is reluctant to pay attention to the academic curriculum when incessantly admonished for his wrongdoings, censured for his inattentiveness, won't be enjoying his studies. he might begin studying being scared of the berate and austerity of the teacher, but In such predicament, a cordial relation with the student can undoubtedly surmount his stubbornness. Because, caring for the child will ultimately break the walls between them. In other words,More the positive attitudes of the child is feted more he will be ebullient to perform infalliably. However, it might seem that ignoring the negative sports might result in further pertinaciousness of the child, but at times by condoning some picadillo thwarts the apogee of sordid activities In the above example, it can be depicted that how just by praising a trifling might play a important roll in teaching.
Further, teaching in professional life is far more arduous then the academic life. In the professional life, it usually seems that the employees are continuously scared of the reproachful attitude of the employers and above all the sanction for any type of malfeasance. but, this Fear must be present in the employers too.Whenever a employer rebukes over petty issues, the indignant employers might malevolently cause the utter destruction of the company. Besides, losing fruitful and avid workers is surely a great loss for the company. So teaching them the company matters in a cordial course might result in the proper contribution of the employee in his work.
Finally, in this economic world , workin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, hence, however, if, so, then, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31420765027 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0685741088 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.952237275 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.411764706 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117872144342 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364208107875 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371732234071 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669107966346 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613060133958 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.