The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
In this issue the author is presenting that the people in society can judge from there leaders who are there to guide them.But this remain true only in certain conditions. And many time the leadors of the society is the one who guide the people of society in the right direction.so the thought is supporting to what the author is trying to present the society.
Firstly, the societ having the best character of men and women as there role model so they can be guide in a nice manner and so the society can be judge on the bases of that. For instanc, there was a collage in the philipins satate, in their hte students were guided by the reference of there role model and all teh students are asked to be like them and so all most many of them were trying to be like them in many good manner and so all the students were inspired by the leader in collage same will be pretended to be happen in society. And so if the society will contain any attracting roal model then many of the people will be trying tobe like them and so we can jude the society on that bases.
Secondly, Their were many beneficial of the good leader in the society. If there are some leaders in the men then they can help other men to be like them and to teach them some of the good social activites in the society. Similerly if their were many beneficial if the women role mode in teh society so that they can help them to be like the and to improve there social activites. For instance, in the cityif gujarat their were many people use to throw their garbage on the out side area insted of the dustbin and so the leade of that society requested to no do so.Then after many of them are inspred form them and decided not to do it again . By this way many role model or the leaders guide the society in the right direction. and so we can jugde the society by them.
Thirdly, Many time the role models or the leaders are not only one who make more impect on that society but the people of the societyu can also be the one who make the more impect on the society. For instance cricket team contain 11 players but one on of them is a leader of the team andis the one who is respomsible for all but the players are the one who leads the team togather.
Finally, The society can be judge form their leaders in many different aspects and so not all time the result will be that as be the judgement of the leader in the society. In conclusion we can predict the society people on the bases of there role models or their leaders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ere leaders who are there to guide them.But this remain true only in certain condit...
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Suggestion: many times
...in true only in certain conditions. And many time the leadors of the society is the one w...
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...s there role model so they can be guide in a nice manner and so the society can be judge on the ...
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...r men to be like them and to teach them some of the good social activites in the society. S...
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... Similerly if their were many beneficial if the women role mode in teh society so...
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...e cityif gujarat their were many people use to throw their garbage on the out side ...
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...eople use to throw their garbage on the out side area insted of the dustbin and so the l...
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...form them and decided not to do it again . By this way many role model or the lead...
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...ide the society in the right direction. and so we can jugde the society by them. ...
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...r. Finally, The society can be judge form their leaders in many different aspects...
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...iety can be judge form their leaders in many different aspects and so not all time the result ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 480.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21458333333 5.05705443957 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10501809483 2.79657885939 75% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.333333333333 0.4932671777 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8517853009 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.866666667 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135955035853 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735218226768 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551269025772 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873797223931 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027872769305 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.73 12.1639044944 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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