A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
In this issue the author is suggesting that all the students of the nation should have to study the same national curriculum untill they enter the college. And by doing so many different probems may appear in the system of education. And it is also not practical to have unity of studies in the country. So tere were many reasons due to which author point get weaken.
Firstly, nation contain a lots of students of different background and different cultures and to uniform the studies may not be feverable for all. In big country like India there were many different cultures and languages in the entires country. And to make commen studies to all the students will make more difference to them based on their surrounding atmosphere. As each state has their own native language and to maker commen in studies will cause many diffeerent problems such as may be they are not comfetable with the language given and many more.
Secondly, In the uniform studies will be conducted to the entire nation then their should be a system to maintain their cources to the entire nation and to do so is difficult task for the nation. And this will increase the compation between the students of the nation and due to which the education may get decrease in that country. Similarly this will result in many flaws in the education system and due to which the education of the students get affected.
Thirdly, If this system is developed which can take care of the entire education of the country then that will lead the country to the another direction of success and due to which the students may get motivated by another students on the same sytem of education.For instance the students get motivated by others in many fields like spotes, science experiments and fest, and many more.
Finally, there were many different aspects due to which this same national curriculum will get affected but if the proper system is developed then that will be helpfull to all the students of the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...full to all the students of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, third, thirdly, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77906976744 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46097172434 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406976744186 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.2786863333 60.3974514979 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.461538462 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 5.21951772744 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303629502779 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132423346793 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17417613504 0.0758088955206 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20121944768 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100611983839 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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