On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighbouring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals.
In the argument the author concludes that by decreasing the rent amount of the mopeds from 50 per day to 25 per day would result in to decresaing the number if accidents between the mopeds and the pedestrians. This conclusion is based on the same scenerio faced by the neighbouring Island and doing so will decrease the accidents 50 percent annualy. As there is no specific evidence provided by the author to relate both satements and due to absence of any supporting conditions the author conclusion may not to be considered according to me.
Firstly, the author described thet the main source of transpotation among the population of the Balmer Island is mopeds and so due to this many people are renting the moped for there way of transpotation. This result in one big flow that as the people were able to renting mopeds so this leads to number of people were able to spend money on renting that is also high and so if the rent will reduce then the people will hire more mopeds compare to the previous and will also leads to increase in the number of accidents. this raises the question that does people even walk more after decreasing the rents of the mopeds? And on what bases does decreaseing the rents will result in the decreasing in the number of accidents.
Secondly, during the summers the population increase to 100,000 would result in to the increase people renting the moped and so if the rents are decreased or not it does not leads to any conclution to such a huge number of population and it also does not make nay specific affect lowering on the number of accidents then previous one.
Thirdly, The author had compared the Balmer Island with the Seaville Island on the bases of the decreaing the fare of the mopads to decreaing the number of accidents, with out take into considertion of any basic difference between the two and so this causes the question about wether both having the same number of population? does the anither Island people also uses the mopeds as there primary way of transport?.
Finally, due to lack of evidance of the assumptions made by the author in decreaing the number of accident does not likely to be happen. If the Government of Balmer Island consider the specific features of the Seavill's Island in which both have same condition the and then only they can consider such kind of conclusion.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: In the argument the author concludes that by decreasing the rent amount of the mopeds from 50 per day to 25 per day would result in to decresaing the number if accidents between the mopeds and the pedestrians.
Error: decresaing Suggestion: decreasing
Sentence: This conclusion is based on the same scenerio faced by the neighbouring Island and doing so will decrease the accidents 50 percent annualy.
Error: neighbouring Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: annualy Suggestion: annual
Error: scenerio Suggestion: scenario
Sentence: As there is no specific evidence provided by the author to relate both satements and due to absence of any supporting conditions the author conclusion may not to be considered according to me.
Error: satements Suggestion: statements
Sentence: Firstly, the author described thet the main source of transpotation among the population of the Balmer Island is mopeds and so due to this many people are renting the moped for there way of transpotation.
Error: transpotation Suggestion: transportation
Error: thet Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: And on what bases does decreaseing the rents will result in the decreasing in the number of accidents.
Error: decreaseing Suggestion: decreasing
Sentence: Secondly, during the summers the population increase to 100,000 would result in to the increase people renting the moped and so if the rents are decreased or not it does not leads to any conclution to such a huge number of population and it also does not make nay specific affect lowering on the number of accidents then previous one.
Error: conclution Suggestion: conclusion
Sentence: Thirdly, The author had compared the Balmer Island with the Seaville Island on the bases of the decreaing the fare of the mopads to decreaing the number of accidents, with out take into considertion of any basic difference between the two and so this causes the question about wether both having the same number of population? does the anither Island people also uses the mopeds as there primary way of transport?.
Error: wether Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: mopads Suggestion: moods
Error: decreaing Suggestion: decreasing
Error: anither Suggestion: another
Error: considertion Suggestion: consideration
Sentence: Finally, due to lack of evidance of the assumptions made by the author in decreaing the number of accident does not likely to be happen.
Error: evidance Suggestion: evidence
Error: decreaing Suggestion: decreasing
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 16 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 413 350
No. of Characters: 1907 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.508 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.617 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.487 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 138 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 41.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.055 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.9 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.445 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.711 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.153 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...hat by decreasing the rent amount of the mopeds from 50 per day to 25 per day wo...
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Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ecreasing the rent amount of the mopeds from 50 per day to 25 per day would resu...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...een the mopeds and the pedestrians. This conclusion is based on the same scenerio...
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Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...thor to relate both satements and due to absence of any supporting conditions the...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...to me. Firstly, the author described thet the main source of transpotation am...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...mong the population of the Balmer Island is mopeds and so due to this many people...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...way of transpotation. This result in one big flow that as the people were able to...
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Line 6, column 252, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
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...s compare to the previous and will also leads to increase in the number of acciden...
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Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...lso leads to increase in the number of accidents. this raises the question that...
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...increase in the number of accidents. this raises the question that does people ev...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ecreasing in the number of accidents. Secondly, during the summers the populat...
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Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'lead'
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... rents are decreased or not it does not leads to any conclution to such a huge number...
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Line 9, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...tion to such a huge number of population and it also does not make nay specific a...
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Line 12, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...accidents then previous one. Thirdly, The author had compared the Balmer Islan...
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Line 12, column 169, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...s to decreaing the number of accidents, with out take into considertion of any basic dif...
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Line 12, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...nto considertion of any basic difference between the two and so this causes the...
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...of any basic difference between the two and so this causes the question about we...
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Line 13, column 39, Rule ID: ASK_WETHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whether'?
Suggestion: whether
... and so this causes the question about wether both having the same number of populati...
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...h having the same number of population? does the anither Island people also uses the...
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...f accident does not likely to be happen.If the Government of Balmer Island conside...
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Line 15, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...specific features of the Seavills Island in which both have same condition the a...
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Line 16, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...atures of the Seavills Island in which both have same condition the and then on...
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Line 16, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...y can consider such kind of conclusion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 55.5748502994 128% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 412.0 441.139720559 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7427184466 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55479123276 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412621359223 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.8473053892 162% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.0658753768 57.8364921388 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.636363636 119.503703932 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4545454545 23.324526521 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 5.70786347227 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 5.15768463074 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.25449101796 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248942298981 0.218282227539 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105641158648 0.0743258471296 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621038907885 0.0701772020484 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999684309359 0.128457276422 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661084392745 0.0628817314937 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 14.3799401198 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 48.3550499002 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 12.197005988 135% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.1389221557 151% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.9071856287 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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