A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
This issue includes that the nation should contain all the students same national curriculum which can not be possible for many country having lage number of pobulation. There were many different nation which contain a
vast population and different cultural aspects, and so many there were many different areas based on which this condition will not be full filled by all the students of the country.
Firstly, for larger country like India which has a lager number of population and verity of cultures for which there were different curriculum are present in there perticular area and so it is not possible to take any one of them to make universal among all.
for instance consider two states gujarat and delhi of India among which there were different language and so to bring national curriculum become more difficult in both the state because of there culture and religious deversity and many more aspects.
Due to which it is not practical to bring the uniform course in the studies of entire country.
Secondly, for making the entire nation to the same course brings many different problems such as to maintain the unity among all the cources and to uniformly conduct all the key features like test or certain acctivites. Which may leads to many aspects to taken into
consideration as to make a unity to controll all such process and it is difficult to so. For instance if a small company want to expand its area so the company need many capital investement and need many employes to works from both the present and future company
and it will be difficult for such a samll company to maintain the uniformaty between the companies. And in the same way it is difficult to do the same in the studies.
Thirdly, the school student need some kind of different atmosphere of there studies based on there age and on ther surrounding envirnment because there were various location for which the students could not possibly do same type learning as they do in the different atmosphere
and if such national curriculum would take place then that leads to more beneficial to the country in the field of development but it is very difficult to do so.
Finally, the author wants to bring uniform education among all the students of the nation but practically it can not be possible for some big countries having different cultures and atmosphere in different region of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, as to, for instance, kind of, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 408.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53490506811 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421568627451 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.579004614 60.3974514979 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.818181818 118.986275619 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0909090909 23.4991977007 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 5.21951772744 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.97078651685 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212353287367 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101625644237 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767782521254 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950982403528 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667498635367 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 14.1392134831 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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