The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
The author of the statement claim that the best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models because the heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals. Many will argue that this statement holds all the time, while others may counter the statement by providing the example for their claim. In my essay, I will highlight both the side of the statement and provide sound reasoning for the same.
The society is a collection of political, culture and economical norms that the majority of people live by. And to understand the character of the society through heroes and role models is quite debatable. One can not firmly say that by examining the characteristics of a society's role models and heroes, we will be able to understand society's character. Because role models and heroes are those who have achieved something by following some principle or path or from the hard work and their character might be different from society's culture.
By examining the heroes and role model character one could only able to understand a very little of a societies culture as society consists of people from different ethnicity, background, and culture. Which cannot be understood from their heroes or role model because role model can be anyone whom you admire, he might have different culture, different background and he might not aware about the other's culture, then could you understand the character by examining him.
For understanding the society character one has to explore the society, interact with the people and understand the history and the culture of the society, for example, if you want to understand the character of India,and you interact with the role models of the country like Sachin Tendulkar, Amitabh Banchan then you won't get clear picture of India's culture as India is a huge country with a huge population, so for understanding their character you have to visit India, interact with the locals, visit the historic place that only one could able to understand their character.
In sum, the author's we can say that the by examine the heroes and role model idea we can get only get an idea about the society and to understand the society's culture you have to visit the society, interact with their people, read their history and explore their historic place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'societys the highest'.
Suggestion: societys the highest
...use the heroes and role models reveal a societys highest ideals. Many will argue that this state...
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Suggestion: , and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95297029703 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58271055946 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.393564356436 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.193572067 60.3974514979 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.909090909 118.986275619 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.7272727273 23.4991977007 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409998930936 0.243740707755 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197208618568 0.0831039109588 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19095565534 0.0758088955206 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247719619834 0.150359130593 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108026404197 0.0667264976115 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 14.1392134831 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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