The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A "society" is formed by people with different beliefs, religion, ideologies grouped as one. The characteristics of a society depend upon various factors such as quality of life within the society, the altercations within the society etc. The prompt suggests that the best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or role models. One could delineate the fact that the younger generation tends to look up to their role models for inspiration and dream to have the same lifestyle as them. Hence, these role models could best explain the character of society. But the bona fide is that no one or a sample of people from society could explain their characteristics.
The idea of "individuality" states that each individual has a different personality, thinking and beliefs. This idea is the key to understand the characteristics of a society. Human beings, termed as the most intelligent species on Earth, are unique from other species but also within themselves. Each individual has different thoughts on a subject, which in most cases leads to an altercation. Take an example of politics, one could examine various cases of no-confidence votes against a prime minister or president of a country because they fail to represent their supporters, which caused due to a clash of different ideologies.
The younger generation being naive look up to their role models based on their lifestyles, their monetary value and achievements. But the blatant truth is that their lives are different from what is perceived. People fail to understand the real personality of a role model and believe in their forged personality shown by media and televisions. Even if they are caught in a scam or wrongdoing, they rally behind their role models in supporting them and being hostile towards their naysayers. Hence, a role model is not a perfect fit for representing a group of people.
In conclusion, a society consists of various individuals, whose beliefs might differ from one another. The idea of Sampling a group of people from the society to examine its characteristics is rife with fallacies. A better method is to ask questions such as, whether they are fighting for their rights? How diverse is the concerned society? Is education provided to all the groups in society? Asking these questions would help one to examine society diligently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
A 'society' is formed by people...
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Line 4, column 462, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...help one to examine society diligently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, in conclusion, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 399.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11278195489 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16116312543 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2920668978 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7272727273 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1363636364 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13636363636 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250925209773 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079023226352 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10674844827 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148201150914 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104083488947 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.