The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The heroes or role models of a society are not representative of the character of a society for a society is composed of myriad personalities, each with their own -and often- polar opposites as role models. The use of role models and heroes effectively lowers the sample size of the data set, a cardinal sin in statistics.
A common characteristic of a role model or a hero as defined by a society is popularity within certain social circles. Popularity has inevitably become the key to being idolized and can be gained by a variety of means, most unpopular. With the level of connectivity in the modern world, personalities can gain a significant following in a matter of days should they be involved in a situation sensational enough to capture the attention of the general public. A sensational situation is typically one charged with emotion and is not representative of the character of an individual. This leads to individuals with falsified persons being idolized by gullible viewers and followers. This brings us to the question of what qualities or features a role model should have. The absence of an answer to this leads to the conclusion that role models are not an accurate representation of the character of society.
Moreover, the variances in the attitudes of the role models of society serve to nullify findings of a study due to the typically polar personalities of the people regarded as role models. Polarizing individuals are more likely to be identified as role models, for people identify with individuals who share certain views of theirs and place themselves in societally defined camps. This promotes a herd-like mentality and is an inaccurate representation of the character of society or individuals. Role models also tend to differ by geographical regions due to different levels of acceptance of practices and activities considered positive. This lowers the impact of a study due to the unequal representation of various classes of society in their role models.
A better solution would be to evaluate the character of a society as a whole with a scientifically determined sample size to account for various cultures within society. Individuals free of external influences are more likely to voice their opinions to the fullest extent, thereby allowing for a clearer picture to emerge. A large sample size from a pool that accounts for all cultures from various geographical regions ensures accurate examination of character.
For the reasons mentioned above, role models and heroes chosen by society are not the ideal individuals to study to determine the character of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... enough to capture the attention of the general public. A sensational situation is typically o...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'moreover', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.29203539823 0.240241500013 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.12389380531 0.157235817809 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0995575221239 0.0880659088768 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0353982300885 0.0497285424764 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0132743362832 0.0444667217837 30% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.148230088496 0.12292977631 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0398230088496 0.0406280797675 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.11793383259 2.79330140395 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0420353982301 0.030933414821 136% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.139380530973 0.0997080785238 140% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0110619469027 0.0249443105267 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00884955752212 0.0148568991511 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2622.0 2732.02544248 96% => OK
No of words: 426.0 452.878318584 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.15492957746 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.422535211268 0.366273622748 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.321596244131 0.280924506359 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.220657276995 0.200843997647 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159624413146 0.132149295362 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11793383259 2.79330140395 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450704225352 0.48968727796 92% => OK
Word variations: 48.9608461291 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.6666666667 23.380412469 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3221296019 59.4972553346 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.666666667 141.124799967 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 23.380412469 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.222222222222 0.674092028746 33% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 55.8262910798 51.4728631049 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.78205128205 1.64882698954 169% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.590101676363 0.391690518653 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125723556695 0.123202303941 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0773476089037 0.077325440228 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.606880874053 0.547984918172 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177233469978 0.149214159877 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.276767722902 0.161403998019 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140662194015 0.0892212321368 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.470210425293 0.385218514788 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.127582771763 0.0692045440612 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.450426025589 0.275328986314 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777534582582 0.0653680567796 119% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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