Claim In any field business politics education government those in power should step down after five years Reason The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership

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Claim: In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.

It is very true that having a group of people dominating certain fields like business, politics, education, government, etc., for extensive periods of time is undersible.

However, I do not agree with the author’s assertion that any leader should step down after five years. When people get a new position in a company, school, or government, they need time to get used to their new environment and new job. It is very likely that in the first few years, they need to acquire work experience and personal connections to be more competitive and efficient. If they have to leave their positions within 5 years, they need to constantly adapt to new jobs and environments, which is a bad allocation of time and effort. In addition, such an inefficient way of spending time not just affects those people themselves, but the people they work with and the people they work for.

On top of the waste of time, changing leadership frequently would inevitably lead to instability. If a company spends several years trying to make a deal with the government of another company, a change in leadership on either side might compromise this process, leading to significant chaos and undesirable business atmosphere. Long term business, educational, and political activities such as R&D process and infrastructure constructions may not exist due to such volatility.

While it is a better idea not to replace the leaders within 5 years, it is certainly not desirable to allow leaders to stay in power for extensive stints. We want the business world, education system, and politics to be dynamic and competitive while still having stability. When making the tradeoff between dynamics and stability, it is imperative not to lean too much toward either side.

In sum, five years is not long enough to keep stability and efficiency in business, politics, education and government at a desirable level, which is why I disagree with the claim.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, while, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07523510972 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92427262201 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576802507837 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2712811266 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.538461538 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185400795905 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595031682714 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567798109888 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854821930582 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265688120137 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, while, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07523510972 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92427262201 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576802507837 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2712811266 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.538461538 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185400795905 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595031682714 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567798109888 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854821930582 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265688120137 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.