Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
It is true heroes and role models show a society's highest ideals. When a person do something outstanding for society from others people of the society then he or she became hero or role model for society. Heroes and role model have uniqueness which makes them different from others. They have abstract thinking pattern and power to do something extraordinary than others. It is not necessary that the heroes and role model can define the character of men and women of that society. They did differently that clearly show they are different from general people of society. There are some famous examples which help to strengthen my point.
First of all, the great Mahatma Gandhi is the role for so many people and he is not only admired in India but he renounced in other countries also. He always spread his principal and motivates people to accept them. He worked for peace and non-violence in the country even during freedom struggle he holds his patience. He is such a great personality who taught a lot but with his personal characteristics we cannot understand the society. When Gandhi Ji had worked with truth and non-violence at same time some leaders worked with violence. To understand the character of a society it’s not enough to check the character of heroes or role model. There are very people who really represent the Gandhi Ji's teachings and follow them with heart. The heroes rise in the society with the demand of situation and they use their uniqueness to help the society.
Even in the society different types of people live together to fulfill their own demands. Let’s take an example, I am living in India and here people belong to different culture and custom but they lived together on the basis of mutual understanding. Any hero or role model in society also belongs to a specific culture then he or she could not represent the society. Moreover, in previous example the Gandhi Ji belongs to Gujarati family so it may happen we found similarity with Gujarati custom but his principles are unique and his own cognition. Each person is unique so can find some similarity but the core information could not get from study of heroes or role models characters.
Additionally, there are so many famous personalities such as Mother Teresa, Nelson Mandela, A.P.J.Adul Kalam, Abraham Lincoln and many more which are famous as heroes of the society but they all worked for society without their own benefit. The best way to understand the character of the society one should visit to their land and stay in local areas. In any country the core culture and real character of people would study in the local market or tribal areas because the heroes made themselves different from others.
Finally, to understand the character of society one should visit there because on the basis of aforementioned examples it is not good idea to look at the heroes or role models of the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'societys the highest'.
Suggestion: societys the highest
...t is true heroes and role models show a societys highest ideals. When a person do something outs...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...dia but he renounced in other countries also. He always spread his principal and mot...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...freedom struggle he holds his patience. He is such a great personality who taught ...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Adul
...as Mother Teresa, Nelson Mandela, A.P.J.Adul Kalam, Abraham Lincoln and many more wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, then, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2420.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86921529175 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57592896754 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440643863179 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 782.1 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8080137552 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.833333333 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7083333333 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29166666667 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316293660277 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115369451187 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132462988486 0.0758088955206 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20979230401 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654382153568 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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