As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Today we are living in age of science and technology. Technologies made our life comfortable and smooth than previous days; But as people relay more and more to technology to solve problems , the ability of humans tothink themselves will surely deteriorate. I am totally agree with the statement, lets discusse some examples to facilitate my position.
Firstly, now a days people use calculator, laptop and other calculas device to solve daily calculations. When I wennt for shoping with my mother then she calculate cost of product faster than me. For me to calculate little calculations calculator is must but she calculate faster. She always say that todays genration use more and more technologies due to which they can not do mental caculations as fast as we can.
Secondly, Technology developed to help us like internet helps to lessen the distance between people. For the children internet is a real world and they spend alot of time with internet. They think whatever they see or listen in virtual world is true and very important for us. Due to technology the thinking get contigence and so many thinking related disorders occure in small children also.
Furthermore in above discourse, The physical activites also deteriorate due to more dependency on tecnology. The physical activities directly affect the mental activities. To sit on a place and spend time with video games and television is most easiest work. To do smoething differnt and inovative we have to work hard. Due to lithergic behavior the thinking patthern also detoriate.
Finally, Everything has two sides one is bright and other is dark. As technology facilitate our life style at the same time it deterioate our thinking patthern. On the basis of aformentioned examples it is transperant that due to more and more rely on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and more to technology to solve problems , the ability of humans tothink themselve...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...s will surely deteriorate. I am totally agree with the statement, lets discusse some ...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... to facilitate my position. Firstly, now a days people use calculator, laptop and othe...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ition. Firstly, now a days people use calculator, laptop and other calculas de...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'calculates'.
Suggestion: calculates
...nnt for shoping with my mother then she calculate cost of product faster than me. For me ...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'calculations'' or 'calculation's'?
Suggestion: calculations'; calculation's
...ter than me. For me to calculate little calculations calculator is must but she calculate fa...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'calculates'.
Suggestion: calculates
...calculations calculator is must but she calculate faster. She always say that todays genr...
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Line 7, column 388, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ated disorders occure in small children also. Furthermore in above discourse, The...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...rders occure in small children also. Furthermore in above discourse, The physical activi...
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Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'easiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: easiest
...time with video games and television is most easiest work. To do smoething differnt and inov...
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Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the easiest'.
Suggestion: most the easiest
...time with video games and television is most easiest work. To do smoething differnt and inov...
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Line 11, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... sides one is bright and other is dark. As technology facilitate our life style at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14371257485 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88262089601 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553892215569 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8334907007 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366345415272 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995569115813 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147350344254 0.0758088955206 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231334635703 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173890713914 0.0667264976115 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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