Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with othersWrite a response in which you discu

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Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others

Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.

Leaders are important part of the society which helps to prepare peace and consistent growth in society. The Leaders in government, industry or other fields should have sense of cooperation as well as competition. In my opinion, I agree partially with the given statement that the young people should be cooperative as well as competitive while working in any environment. There are few examples in following paragraphs which supports my stance.

Moreover, in government the ruling party tries to work better for their vote bank and opposition tries to obstruct their work. It happened because of unhealthy competition between two parties. As I had seen in my colony the government decided twenty-four hours electricity supply but due to maintained before monsoon the government cut power for two hours daily. Despite cooperation the Opposition party raised objection on ruling party. So, it is important that there should be cooperation between leaders.

Furthermore, we can observe the importance of cooperation among leader at industries or any organization. For example, the finance department head and production department head both are leaders of their own departments, but they should have cooperative relations with each other’s. Without healthy relations the institutes cannot work properly. So, society should prepare its young people to create healthy competition with sense of cooperation with colleagues.

Additionally, the competition is also important as cooperation. These are two parallel concepts which work simultaneously to create healthy and productive environment. The competition provide motivation to achieve target and it enhance productivity of work. The feeling of cooperation balanced the competition and placate the working surrounding. As we saw in cricket match players play for their country not only for themselves. They have competition within their team, but they also have strong sense of cooperation. So, the competition and cooperation both are important.

Conclusively, the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in any fields, with a sense of cooperation as well as competition.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, so, well, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 37.0 12.9106741573 287% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 326.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63803680982 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16466313804 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51226993865 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1309033498 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5238095238 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5238095238 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157669786041 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490707145092 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555490788399 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100524792271 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734863904422 0.0667264976115 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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