Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
A society does not run on a single line of thought. There are multiple threads that tie a society together. Each person in a society might have different aspirations and expectations. Therefore it is difficult to predict the character and ideas of a society by their role models.
Every person in a society is entitled to their own opinion. While one might have Warren Buffet as their role model for his successful investment tactics, the other might idolize Mozart or Beethoven for their erudite music compositions. Therefore in short each person will choose their role models based on whom they want to emulate in their career.
Another direction which must be taken into consideration is that the same person might have different heroes for different ideas. He or she might be inspired by the simplicity of Abdul Kalam while at the same time he or she might want to follow Elon Musk for his entrepreneurship.
Also, it might not be possible to survey the entire population in a society to know their heroes. Therefore extrapolating the thoughts and ideas of a small population will belie the ideas of the entire society.
Thus it might not be sufficient to read the attitude of a society by analysing their heroes and role models.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 211.0 442.535393258 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90521327014 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75359120955 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530805687204 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5798213956 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160321905144 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817220503604 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748971867111 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112234603608 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924568856406 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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