Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
The society is made by their citizens and it is true that their leaders provide the insights that by which the norms of that society can be understood. I agree with the authors claim and provide the most conspicuous reasons to state my rear points.
First, a leader is elected to represent the community and to make the decisions that act as the positive gradient in the welfare of the people. For instance, The Prime Minister of India, Mr. Modi provides a lucid example of how he represents his country among the other nations. Precedent government's leaders are not that much capable of showcasing India as per other fast economically growing developing nation in the UN but the current administration was capable of making an impact to an extent. It is true that these are some technical and operational developments but the behavior of the our leader is what makes his apart from other world leaders. We are friends with many developed nations and were able to finalize the deals that the previous government was not able to comply. Also, the present of International Yoga Day is the clear example of the persuasive nature of our prime minister which was made possible due to the good behavior terms with the UN.
The good leader is the one who complies with his team members and makes prudent decisions with them. the perfect example for this illustration is Mr. APJ Abdul Kalam, the first Missle scientist of India. In his jurisdiction, there were first 2 attempts of making the missle failed to which he stands staunch with his team member till they together made the successful attempt to deliver the correct product. Despite the pressure from media and that Government official he did not change the team and were committed to delivering the promised results. This quality of the leader as depicted by Mr. Kalam still exist in Indian Missle Organisation where each person is idea is to consider despite their designation.
In the area of Films and Television, the actors do play a crucial role in making the viewers believe of certain aspect been shown on the screen. For example, Amir Khan public announcement of his children not feeling safe in India backfired. and his haters skyrocketed within a few days. Although, He has rights to freedom of speech and expression as per constituent of India his statement was highly acclaimed as he is considered as a role model in Film Industry.
In conclusion, the aforementioned facts clearly state that the role models revealing a society's highest ideals should have their best behavior while presenting themselves to the public and other leaders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, still, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2173.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92743764172 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67275286154 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548752834467 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3945792257 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.722222222 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0788453771279 0.243740707755 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025212444316 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501935866802 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724931502968 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729731657613 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.