The above statement claims that the neologisms of the internet world, mainly "Blogosphere" has deteriorated the political discourse in the country, reason being that any person can easily publish his/ her views publicly through this platform. I do not completely agree with this claim.
Firstly, in the current world of freedom and individuality, blogs turn out to be a great platform for individuals to put forth their ideas about any particular issue. In today's world, everyone believes in the principle of democracy and Freedom of Speech and searches for a suitable stage for their views. Blogs in this case help, by being one such platform.
Secondly, during the season of elections, understanding the views of the common people becomes the important point for all the political parties, in order to win the contest. Blogs in such a case provide first-hand information, of what the people want out of the government and at what stage the party in authority is functioning.
Thirdly, while campaigning for any good cause, or for providing any exigent news that is to be spread among people through the government, Blogs turn out to be an effective way of publicizing.
On the other hand, the freedom of speech on blogs can turn out to be harmful as claimed above. There are always some notorious people who spread a lot of rumors and calumny about any eminent person through these platform. As many people are active on such blogs, spreading rumors has become an easy job for anyone.
Summing up, I would like to conclude that Blogosphere has provided an astounding platform for everyone to put their views, but we as an user should decide whether to believe in any of them or not. The freedom given should not be misused, or properly monitored over, to ensure efficient use of the innovation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 134, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 304.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99342105263 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8552858961 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6335084979 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128770773771 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454596391733 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646750976457 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726425372641 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730175334952 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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