Following one's passion has become one the most hotly discussed aspects of contemporary life. Living life without any templates, guided by the instincts and inspirations of the self is truly an admirable ideology. The "follow your dreams" doctrine is that man pursues endeavors in the lifetime of the fields that he connects with, has a burning rage for, or it adept at. Instead of abiding by the canons and frequent trends, one trails on wanderlusts. Not only does this open new avenues for adventure, it gives us the freedom and everyone innately desires. If man does what he likes, he no longer has to work - implying that work is play, a pleasure. Although, it is not always the case that an impassioned drive lends you all that you want, occassionally, it does provides some dents in the so rosy picture depicted.
Striving in the domains your predilection is one of the paramount modes of jouissance. The reason being, when you put enough hours of dedicated work to a subject, you excel, and gradually you tend to be as perfect as it gets. Excelling in tasks not only serves as an impetus to further propel yourself farther, but, it also provides eternal joy. All revolutionary discoveries of mankind were made by people of supreme indulgence and love for work. A half-hearted attempt by Thomas Edison at inventing the light bulb, would not have likely resulted in success. Furthermore, in most fields of development - arts, natural sciences, economics, humanities. politics, it is the continuous persistance that is entailed in order to produce something extraordinary. A passion for work and an inspiring dream not only facilitates this uphill; task, but also renders this renowned works possible.
My personal account of training in the gym serves as an appropriated example - with months and months of hardwork and dedication, I was possible to lose those 10 pounds of fat that haunted me since I was in grade 5. Had it not been my kindling fire, and the dreams lifting me up, it would not have been reality. In the course of this journey, I also happened to have undergone numerous minor and major injuries: fracture in the wrist, twitch in the ankle, severe damage to the knees, shoulder impeachment, but these only proved to be obstacles in my path, not impossibilities. Had it not been my dreams and the passion, had I been living with "follow the trend, study, work" mentality, all this would not have been possible.
Although, it is true that the "follow your dream" can serve good, it can also damage the subject of not followed wisely. Losing large amounts of money in the stock market is not un
In sum, a "follow your dreams" is not an advice to look down upon, rather to be encouraged. One check has to be kept in mind while undertaking the glorifying path does not cause more harm than profits. "Life is too short to not be lived to the fullest" is a good adage to compound my viewpoint.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: advice
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, while, as to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2464.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 504.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88916598529 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56746031746 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 762.3 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5188506186 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.130434783 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9130434783 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69565217391 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198147119832 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517086652957 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681418430566 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127495125289 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693793639947 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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