Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The above statement claims that governments must ensure that their major cities receive financial support they need in order to thrive. It is said that the reason for this is that it is primarily in cities that a nation’s cultural traditions are preserved and generated. The claim is somewhat reasonable but the reason given is totally fallacious.
It is completely agreeable to provide major cities the financial support they require as they are the major hubs of scientific and industrial development of the nation. It is their where all the inventions and discoveries take place. All the major universities are also situated at these cities, so all the important research work also takes place there. Other than this, it is the major cities where the largest organizations of a country functions. In the global scenario, these cities are the face of a country. So if these cities thrive, it is reflected directly in the socio-economic status of the country. So, it is prudent to support them financially.
However, the reason provided to support the claim is not feasible. To say that a nation’s cultural traditions are preserved and generated in major cities is completely misleading and untrue. There are several examples to contradict the said statement. Consider the cities of India like New Delhi and Bombay. The culture of these cities is very much similar to any other major city of the world. The people residing here wear western clothes and speak fluent English. They are very much accustomed with international brands and food chains. They lead an urbanized and westernized life style. So in order to understand the Indian culture and traditions, Mumbai or New Delhi should be the last choice. Therefore, it cannot be advised to make the claim based on the above reason. The statement above made is highly misleading and can create a contradictory situation while recommending the claim.
The true culture of a nation dwells and flourishes in its small towns and villages. Hence, it is necessary to provide financial support to these hubs of traditional hubs as well. It is observed that many villages in the developing nations like India are extremely deprived of even most basic facilities like clean water and electricity. What is required is sustainable and equivocal management of government funds in order to ensure the complete development that is, on global as well as traditional fronts of the nation.
Hence, it would be right to agree with the claim and the governments of the nations should provide financial support to major cities and ensure their steady and sustainable growth and development. However, the reason fails to provide an appropriate support to the claim; it is still advisable to ensure the preservation of cultural traditions of a country as well by investing in the development of the small towns and villages.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219653179191 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.148362235067 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.131021194605 0.0880659088768 149% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0616570327553 0.0497285424764 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0423892100193 0.0444667217837 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0982658959538 0.12292977631 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0327552986513 0.0406280797675 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87447438461 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327552986513 0.030933414821 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111753371869 0.0997080785238 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0115606936416 0.0249443105267 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00770712909441 0.0148568991511 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2874.0 2732.02544248 105% => OK
No of words: 470.0 452.878318584 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11489361702 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376595744681 0.366273622748 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28085106383 0.280924506359 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.200843997647 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155319148936 0.132149295362 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87447438461 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459574468085 0.48968727796 94% => OK
Word variations: 51.7077767979 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4074074074 23.380412469 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5616414705 59.4972553346 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.444444444 141.124799967 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4074074074 23.380412469 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.407407407407 0.674092028746 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 45.4925137904 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.3893129771 1.64882698954 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.559012058297 0.391690518653 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122635190419 0.123202303941 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0859285384011 0.077325440228 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.523296587964 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163224782424 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209829716348 0.161403998019 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125772539657 0.0892212321368 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.479908729526 0.385218514788 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0611823598617 0.0692045440612 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.426046461169 0.275328986314 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143323630519 0.0653680567796 219% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88274336283 246% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.70907079646 369% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.5995575221 162% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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