Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Any government caters to the citizens, or the people of their respective territory. Any government has its own taste of cultural tradition, and it varies worldwide. The interesting thing about varied cultural traditions is that they speak for the past of their tradition and history of their culture, and the people who follow it.
It is obvious that major cities of any government are face of their respective territories; and anyone would want to keep their face clean, so as to put up a good image for the world to witness. For example, Mumbai City is a major city in India, and it is also the financial capital of the same country; and we all know that Mumbai is widely known for its diversity in cultures and traditions. Major cities are undoubtedly an important asset of any government, because they preserve the rich culture of the territory they reside in.
It can be considered that other minor cities which are significantly rich in cultural traditions also contribute to the overall growth of the government. In a country like India, major cities are more attracted by the western culture other than preserving its own; thus, many small towns in India are seen following their centuries-long traditions more passionately than it is seen in major cities. However, such small towns are undermined because the population density of the town or city they are living in.
On the other hand, many people who live in major cities for their education or job or business, tend to go to their native place (outside of the major city) to celebrate festivals. For example, a businessman who is originally from San Jose, lives in San Fransisco for his work related purpose; but tends to spend the thanksgiving with his family in San Jose.
However, the major cities are always the ones who are rich in preserving cultural traditions and to generate new traditions because the diversity of people confined in a small area. Each person has his/her own cultural beliefs and they add up to generate new traditions as they start living together in a major city. Also, this flexibility n tradition also attracts a significant amount of tourism, thus making it more popular globally.
In conclusion, it is true that governments must ensure that major cities should receive all the financial support in order to thrive, because it is the major cities who become the face of their respective government, also producing diverse traditions and eventually preserving them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ne would want to keep their face clean, so as to put up a good image for the world to wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99031476998 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73899435254 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479418886199 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6331572402 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.4 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5333333333 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352130591428 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129289116934 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831881349062 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202811170064 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856182802453 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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