Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive. Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
The strength and future of a nation, rest on the shoulders of the younger generations; in this case-the students. Indisputably, all students of a nation would represent the nation wherever they find themselves, be it in Africa, Europe and anywhere else, and these students should be taught the same thing in other to have a uniformity in their knowledge skill. However, there are exemptions where this does not apply.
The standard of a school, depends on the ability for each student
The cultural traditions of a nation serves as a footprint for the upcoming generation. It leaves behind, an indelible mark and serves as an exemplar for the generations to come. Indisputably, the preservation of these cultural traditions need a financial stability for them to thrive and still continue to stand as models to follow. However, major cities alone do not serve as the primary hosts of these traditions. Thus, I strongly disagree that major cities should receive financial support from the government because they serve as an embodiment of these cultural traditions.
First of all, a nation's cultural traditions can be preserved and generated in locations of a nation that are bucolic and insular. These traditions do not necessarily have to be in major cities. To illustrate this, let's look at an example of the Nigerian cultural traditions. Most of these traditions are found and thrive better in villages that are close to being uncivilized. Their cultural traditions thrive mainly because of the commitment these people have for their traditions and not even because of the presence of any financial support.
Most cities even get rid of the nations cultural traditions because they want to accommodate 'outsiders' who would see their traditions as ancient and not suitable for a city. Besides, these cities are cosmopolitan and they thrive mainly because of the diversity present. Imagine a city where you can find various tribes and people of different countries. It would be unsurprising for the culture of another country to thrive better than the culture of the nation where they inhabit. In this circumstance, the culture of another nation becomes more popular than the culture of the nation in which these people live. If this happens, the government would instead be promoting another culture rather than theirs with the financial support they provide.
Admittedly, the provision of financial support by the government to its nation would help preserve and generate the nation's cultural traditions. However, this does not stand true for all cases. This would only be true, if it has been established that the cultural traditions of a nation is undoubtedly present in its major cities. Therefore, as there is no support to substantiate the above, then it is pretty much obvious that major cities do not serve as the backbone to a nation's tradition.
In conclusion, although it may be true that ensuring that major cities receive financial support from the government because they help preserve the cultural traditions of a nation, it does not stand true for all instances. As long as some measurements are performed, or some areas are involved, a nations cultural traditions can be preserved in a rustic locality rather than a major city which may not even need financial support from the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2790.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 540.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81295991515 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.405555555556 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 873.9 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3504664049 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422327442503 0.243740707755 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133859691002 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889240961236 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219170499644 0.150359130593 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12276547155 0.0667264976115 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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