Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Author claims that, since major cities are breeding grounds of nation’s culture, cities must be bolstered in terms of finance to flourish further. Both the claim and the reason cannot be agreed, as it is important to provide financial support for all parts of country for overall progress of the country and even minor cities and rural areas also contribute in nation’s culture.
There is no doubt that major cities play an important role in a nation’s economical and cultural development. Major cities attract more and more people and business, so, in a way they are economical and industrial hubs of a nation. It is easy to understand that cities are already thriving and they do not need any more financial support because they are able generate some funding for themselves. Since it is cities where more business is concentrated, lot of revenue is generated from tax, exports and many other ways. Also all industries need human resource, so more and more people migrate to cities in search of various job opportunities and they settle there. For example, Bangalore is one of the major industrial hubs in the country of India and it attracts more people day by day and generating its own revenues.
Coming to the topic of cultural tradition, a country will be having various traditions which differ from place to place. Cities experience a mix of traditions from various parts of the country. Although, we cannot ignore the fact that some unspoiled traditions still exists in cities, a major part of tradition is generated and preserved in rural areas of country because rural areas are place of indigenous people. So, in order to preserve nation’s culture, in fact, rural areas must be given financial support instead of cities. Rural areas already lack generous funding from government and they are not well developed. For the over all development of country it is necessary to fund both cities and villages. Government should prioritize the funding. It is important provide financial support to where development is lacking, instead of concentrating on developed parts.
Conversely, cities reflect how advanced a country is. They are the face of the nation. Nation’s development is often measured on how well its cities are flourishing. Indeed cities should be strengthened because, they are crucial to nation’s socio-economic development and not because they preserve country’s tradition. It would be highly unfair to consider that rural areas have no economical and cultural importance comparison to cities so only cities should be funded well. So the author’s claim cannot be agreed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... from tax, exports and many other ways. Also all industries need human resource, so ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d of concentrating on developed parts. Conversely, cities reflect how advanced ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...on how well its cities are flourishing. Indeed cities should be strengthened because, ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, so, still, then, well, for example, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1938534279 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79524611549 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460992907801 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4592718841 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8636363636 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2272727273 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326178734842 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105125424178 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493469601965 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207339004679 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101228884973 0.0667264976115 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.