Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Imagination can be constrained by external opinions and majorly due to personal experiences. Expericenced people move forward with these opinion but there is an ongoing debate. The prompt recommends that inexperienced people have more imagination power because there are no restrictions or any conventional habits implied on them, which make their imagination ability a more valuable asset than their short time of experience. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this suggestion and argue that experiences do restrict our capacity to imaging more.
To begin with, freshers are hired everywhere so that they could have a new set of eyes and a new perspective on their products. These fledglings do not have any idea about the politics and the business outlook they are just focused on one thing that is the project assigned to them. For instance, a recent computer science undergraduate is hired in a technical company which develops mobile phones. As, the fresher will try to develop this product and give some random and extraordinary ideas that the senior developers could not think of because their mind in now restricted to think in one way only. Hence, the junior developer will give the ideas which will be helpful to his generation and therefore may be used for next set of generations.
Additionally, an inexperienced person may think of scenarios which will help in solving crimes and even complicated surgeries. For example, in India, a MBBS student from AIIMS college was helping a senior surgeon perfor cardiac surgery even after 10 hours the doctor was not able to figure out the problems due to his conventional way of thinking. The student after giving it a look for few minutes figured out the problem and suggested the same to his senior. Further, he was awarded with huge cash prize and also the doctor promised for person training sessions and be his mentor.
Of course, some argue that having experience improves your imagination because the person will know the situation in entirety and help in solving the problem quickly. However, these people mistake their suggestions as their imagination. All our seniors may have their suggestions which may help the imagination of a newbie to not go in wrong path. Thereforce, the reason provided for the above claim is valid.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this opinion' or 'these opinions'?
Suggestion: this opinion; these opinions
.... Expericenced people move forward with these opinion but there is an ongoing debate. The pro...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich will help in solving crimes and even complicated surgeries. For example, in I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, look, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08201058201 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77748171766 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579365079365 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0035984864 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136860761242 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449781730389 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536486663565 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946964818114 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773290140723 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.