Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
Is imagination considered a more valuable asset than experience? This is a complex and subjective matter. Some might argue that imagination is rank higher and is more valuable, while others might argue that this is not true. According to me imagination is important and valuable asset but to placed it higher on ladder than experience would not be right. A perfect balance is need to be found between imagination and experience to gain the maximum benefit. This would be explain in the following essay.
Humans are borned with imagination characteristics and there is nothing to be taught to a person about imagination. Imagination power differs from person to person. Each person thinks and imagine in different way and it is based on how that person experience, or feels the thing. There is no restriction in imagining and people can imagine about anything. For instance, a 3-5 year old child when given a blank piece of paper will start drawing random objects that comes to his or her mind. There would not be any kind of restriction or stopping the child from expressing his ideas.
Experience also plays an important roles in a success of a person. If a person is wants to invent something, and he has thought about the design and the application, but if the person does not know how to implement his ideas as he does not have formal training then that thought goes to waste. Imagination and experience goes simultaneously and no one comes before the other. For example, Sir Issac Newton was able to explain the process of gravitation when he saw an apple fall on his head and due to his prior experience in physics he was able to decode the gravitation phenomena of the Earth.
Imagination and experience both play a significance role while developing any new idea or thing. A person would only be successful when he has ability to imagine new things and experience to fullfil them. Imagination is the key which leads to new inventions. For instance, it was the imagination power of Steve Jobs the owner of the apple company, which led to the invention of ipod, a device that could contain thousands songs and being smaller than a human hand.
In conclusion, I would like to say that imagination and experience both plays a siginificant role in any type of developemnt. There would not be any kind of success if one each is absent. There is no doubt that imagination is limitless and without any constraints of society or attitude.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...hers might argue that this is not true. According to me imagination is important and valuable a...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
...s. Experience also plays an important roles in a success of a person. If a person i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 34.0 12.9106741573 263% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79146919431 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8205582899 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481042654028 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2755999044 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9130434783 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.347826087 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95652173913 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269535235159 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987580155091 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101837247195 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159934133277 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680760380772 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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